Free daps for feedback on my song.

[just my thoughts]

Good afternoon all (atleast on my side of the world). Upcoming artist just trying to get some new ears and feedback. I will be dropping my mixtape next month. Along with a video.

https://soundcloud.com/the-specialist-musik/back-and-forth

 

[just my thoughts]

 

[Chief]

Rocking back and forth, boring back and forth

 

[A.V.]

That generic trap flow, unenthusiastically recorded hook, beat selection, and theme all need to be thrown in the bushes and reworked from the ground up.

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Good job, good effort.

 

[just my thoughts]

Thanks for the honesty

 

[shakobe]

Change the hook

 

[just my thoughts]

Change the hook

You think it needs more energy or change it completely?

 

[Silkk]

:hovehh: Give My Dap

 

[DontEemTry]

You on that Sara Jay right now breh

 

[just my thoughts]

You on that Sara Jay right now breh

 

[JasonSJackson]

lol at doing a love song over that beat.......

i made it about halfway through track before xing it out....

ur sound is.........kind of phoney dog.......i know thats not a descriptive description but thats all thats coming to me right now......plus youre doing too much with the adlibs and all that other stuff. Just rap homie......

 

[just my thoughts]

lol at doing a love song over that beat.......

i made it about halfway through track before xing it out....

ur sound is.........kind of phoney dog.......i know thats not a descriptive description but thats all thats coming to me right now......plus youre doing too much with the adlibs and all that other stuff. Just rap homie......

Not sure how you got love song, but thanks for listening.

 

[JasonSJackson]

Not sure how you got love song, but thanks for listening.

i cut it off prematurly but a chick song is what i meant

 

[just my thoughts]

gotcha

 

[Costanza]

if you are trying to build a fan base why would you do a chick song... nobody wants to hear that...

the hook is terrible... before you try and make songs just make freestyle over a simple beat... put that out.