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verse 2 is crazy and verse 3 is really dope, verse 1 is good too just the other two were harder hitting...politically and "thecolitically" charged but the rhyme scheme and sustenance of the subject was pro level.


I listened to it twice in my pro gear monitors.. it felt like i was using computer speakers.. the voice and beat is thin that's the only knock i felt.

if you could get some width and bass back in the beat.. like get the horn to blare more and get the kicks to stick out i could see me putting it in rotation.

Yeah I was gonna say I had to run that second verse back a couple times.

Hooks are always solid.
 

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3 excellent verses well written, witty and clever. Flow and breath control was very good Also. Great clarity in your words I can hear everything clear. Also a solid hook. The beat might just need a few change ups somewhere just slightly. The lyrics are very strong but beat is just feeling a like a loop. Maybe just one another instrument in there somewhere for the changeup.

But overall great song I don't want to come across as super critical or negative though. Keep doing your thing fam
 

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Late pass 🙏🏾

While the beat is a bit simplistic I still like it because it allows your lyrics/flow to be highlighted more you definitely shined on that side of things. I think the gradual ascent from first to second to third verse worked great here. Some nice clever bars, rhyme patterns and cadence was great. Good shyt breh. :tu:
 
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