Intricate Guh
Banned
Yes, you can. Look at Uzi, Tyler, Nicki. All rappers that don’t have stand out voices but they do something extra to make it ‘pop’. You sounding like the average black male rapping is working against you. Maybe find a new mic. Experiment with them. Not every mic is for everybodyI'm going for mainstream with these tracks, these just some of my newer stuff.
I can't really help the monotone but I'll take the advice on the other 2 critiques
Honestly this makes me want to go harder. Now I want to prove you wrong
, trying reaching out to artists from other regions too.


