How is your hook/chorus game?

[Buckeye Fever]

Im tryna come up wit some hooks. Along wit the beat, it's the life of the song. I just wrote this one:

2 hoez bad as fukk. It dont make no damn sense. And both them yellow bytchez look just like Prince. Minn-e-sota Twinz, Minn-e-sota Twinz, Minn-e-sota Twinz, Minn-e-sota Twinz

 

[Majestic Pape]

Depending on what beat you have and how this shyt actually sounds over it, you probably have a smash hit on your hands with this shyt. Put it like this - if Future sang them lyrics, shyt would go to #1.

 

[Malcolmxxx_23]

hit written all over it

 

[Gunshi]

 

[blackslash]

Real talk doe...makin a good hook/catchy cadence(pattern) for a verse be the hardest part bout writing for me

 

[Rominati]

 

[USSInsiders]

I get it, I get it, I'm so far from finished

 

[Turbulent]

keep it simple and it has to be something that just makes people react viscerally. a lot of it has to do with delivery as well.

tricks people often use:

-using/flipping common sayings in an ironic way
-repetition (not of the chorus, i mean actually repeating some keywords withing the chorus)
--asking a question (again sometimes in an ironic way)
-using words with a low amount of syllables

 

[LOUD]

Money
Cars
Clothes
nikka
That's
What
Gets
The
Hoes
nikka

Just use a choppy flow

 

[Lil Bape the PostGod]

You aint bout that life nikka
you aint bout that life nikka
that life
that life
you aint bout that life nikka

 

[USSInsiders]

When it comes to shooters my nikkas is trained to go
and they getting practice on bytches who crackin' codes

 

[PHamm]

Im tryna come up wit some hooks. Along wit the beat, it's the life of the song. I just wrote this one:

2 hoez bad as fukk. It dont make no damn sense. And both them yellow bytchez look just like Prince. Minn-e-sota Twinz, Minn-e-sota Twinz, Minn-e-sota Twinz, Minn-e-sota Twinz

if you let me sing on it like nate dogg ill give you a free hoook

 

[desp]

When it comes to shooters my nikkas is trained to go
and they getting practice on bytches who crackin' codes

breakin' codes*

But still

 

[USSInsiders]

breakin' codes*

But still

I fukked it up and it still goes hard n/h

 

[Buckeye Fever]

if you let me sing on it like nate dogg ill give you a free hoook

might take u up on the offer