I know how to rap.

[†ZULU â€]

 

[vaudevillevillain]

shyt me too breh

 

[†ZULU â€]

but you aint saying shyt breh. i smoke weed too. cool.

 

[†ZULU â€]

bump for actual feedback/criticism

 

[vaudevillevillain]

but you aint saying shyt breh. i smoke weed too. cool.

so you saying you nicer than me? I went second

 

[†ZULU â€]

nah. im not nicer than anyone, and no ones nicer than me. im just saying the overall message you put out could've stood to go into a bit more depth, as could mine. i fux with you breh. relax.

 

[ryshy]

my bars are the most unique/freshest

i dont record but i can always do a quick 16 or a hook

 

[ugksam]

yall both wack

 

[†ZULU â€]

my bars are the most unique/freshest

i dont record but i can always do a quick 16 or a hook

i like freestyling. do you freestyle a lot, since you don't record?

yall both wack

thanks for giving me some of your energy breh

 

[ryshy]

i like freestyling. do you freestyle a lot, since you don't record?


thanks for giving me some of your energy breh

yea sometimes ill just freestyle for 30 minutes when bored, or in my head while walkin to class. freestyling is fun as hell to me cus personally i find writing lyrics to be a drag, but when i do i can write some nice stuff. my favorite is writing hooks though, nice hooks make the song and u can get creative with those

 

[†ZULU â€]

@silver
yeaaaa doe, i don't even like recording or writing really. i just like to freestyle. i was thinking about just getting to a point where i could freestyle every track i do. i feel you on writing being a drag, but i'm starting to think of it as its own thing entirely. you cool breh ^__^

 

[Rominati]

The 2nd poster waay better than the first. OP ya mixing is off. Vocals too harsh over the beat.

 

[DialeKt]

I'm a dope artist. Y'all should check me out and give me some feedback.

 

[†ZULU â€]

The 2nd poster waay better than the first. OP ya mixing is off. Vocals too harsh over the beat.

thank you Rominati

 

[Mandarin Duck]

I'm not gunna say I'm dope but would love some feedback