I think I got a hit on my hands

[Meta4tony]

but I figured I post it here on the coli to get the opinions of raps harshest critics

 

[CELL]

You may have done but it's not 2006 anymore. Try again.

Keep it Hip Hop next time.

 

[Meta4tony]

heres something i actually rap on

 

[TLR Is Mental Poison]

Bitin Future hmmm

U late

Get a flow

 

[Meta4tony]

i respect your opinion btw there's no autotune on this song

 

[2manyFCKNrappers]

this sounds like a parody

 

[USSInsiders]

but I figured I post it here on the coli to get the opinions of raps harshest critics

The melody is definitely hit worthy but sonically it sounds really bare to me. needs more dubstep

 

[The Dust King]

i liked it but it sounded very bootleg. it needs proper mixing and mastering. it needs to sound crisp. i need to believe those xzylophone sounds are right in my ear.

if nikkaz can "fly like a g6" then you we can all relate to shorty all grown up

 

[Average Coli Poster]

Record this shyt again in a professional studio and send it to ya local radio station

 

[Torrential]

could be a club record

 

[The Unknown Hype]

idk man record it professionally and bring it back here cant get passed the quality

 

[Buckeye Fever]

 

[<<TheStandard>>]

The vocals are wack


the melody works but the beat as a whole needs to be developed.

Like someone said, it sounds like a parody

 

[Big Mel]

yeah you got a hit. you fell and hit ya head.

 

[Meta4tony]

I know the beats bare but that was intentional, I wasnt trying to put a whole orchestra in there, im curious to get a females opinion