I think I got a hit on my hands

[A1Credit]

beat sound real Fruity Loops cant rock with it...

 

[Meta4tony]

@Meta4tony

hope you like my take on it b

man you stupid , i cant front that shyt is funny though

 

[Giselle]

I know the beats bare but that was intentional, I wasnt trying to put a whole orchestra in there, im curious to get a females opinion

It's not the worst that i've heard.
I think that you should record it professionally so that it'll sound better.
The lyrics makes sense and are kind of funny.
It does sound a little bit like a parody.
I could hear it being played as maybe background music in one of those straight to tv/ dvd movies, or a teen movie. A movie that has the same "ugly duckling" situation as the song.

Spoiler

Here's an example of a movie scene
start the music on the first verse @ 52 or 1:19 on the movie scene.

 

[Jordan Taylor]

shyt is tuff I can't lie! Dude is from Queens, NY
@SoUHatePrince

 

[Meta4tony]

yea i need to run them synths through an ssl board, they sound thin coming out of reason

 

[USSInsiders]

man you stupid , i cant front that shyt is funny though

Seriously though find some cac dubstep producers and turn this song into one of those LMFAO type tracks and you might be eating

 

[Loud Still Coolin]

the beat fukkin stooopin on the low

but you need a better flow. or try to harmonize better. the hook go !

 

[C-Styles]

and yall say i'm bad...

 

[Meta4tony]

and yall say i'm bad...

send me a track with an open verse and we will let the coli decide who's better