Big Mel
@bigboss
There were people writing fake roc Marciano verses in a thread on here that read better than your shyt.
If you want lyricism.
- Thread starter DialeKt757
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observe
Banned
This is a real intro to an album..it describes precisely what the concept is for all the following songs to the album..
Album cover dropping on the coli in a few weeks
Album cover dropping on the coli in a few weeks
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
lol okay fakkit.
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
This is garbage. Since none of you nikkas know how to read, a snippet is only a portion of something. My intro describes perfectly what you could expect coming from me and my album. It's funny, cause on this site there's nothing but a lot of unoriginal sounding ass nikkas who are all trying to rap the same. This site is the only site where I get bullshyt coming from a lot of you nikkas. I honestly could give two fukks about any of your opinions. Keep on sounding the same as everyone else and dikk riding each other, cause on some real shyt, there's not a rapper on this site who can fukk with me. Like I challenged this fakkit nikka observe before to go live on this site and rap against me and let the people vote, but he bytched out and didn't even acknowledge I said that. How about this: Until one of you garbage ass nikkas decides you wanna go live and rap against me so that I can shut you the fukk down, I'm not responding or posting anymore in this site. This is just a bootleg ass version of Boxden. I've never encountered more racists and haters anywhere else. I know none of you bytch made nikkas will do it though.
Yo @DialeKt757 , you shouldn't get so defensive when you consciously chose to throw that video out there and ask for peoples opinion on it.
the cac mamba
Banned
whos claiming they can? youre the only one
this shyt isnt nearly good enough to come thru talkin all that shyt in these posts
delivery is trash in that vidlets hear this new track tho
Poetical Poltergeist
Precise and cold hearted
Yeah Dogg, that delivery is hella weak. Lyrics aren't that bad but if u can't deliver that shyt it ain't gonna stick. Keep grinding but u need to tighten up that flow.
Ain't shyt funnier than a wack ass rapper getting defensive when offered constructive criticism 
Cats really tried to give good advice and he came back with "Nah it ain't nothing wrong with my delivery, you must be hearing wrong"
@DialeKt757 You are TRASH dawg. Ya delivery is horrible. How you let your homies gas you up so much? Cuz I know ya homies back home is the only people telling you this shyt is dope.
Cats really tried to give good advice and he came back with "Nah it ain't nothing wrong with my delivery, you must be hearing wrong"
@DialeKt757 You are TRASH dawg. Ya delivery is horrible. How you let your homies gas you up so much? Cuz I know ya homies back home is the only people telling you this shyt is dope.
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
You're an idiot. I have people telling me my shyt is dope from everywhere you fukk nikka. I already said that I was fukked up so I didn't deliver it like I wanted to, but it's all good. Like I said though, I'll be posting a song soon that's gonna shut fakkits like you the fukk up.Ain't shyt funnier than a wack ass rapper getting defensive when offered constructive criticism
Cats really tried to give good advice and he came back with "Nah it ain't nothing wrong with my delivery, you must be hearing wrong"
@DialeKt757 You are TRASH dawg. Ya delivery is horrible. How you let your homies gas you up so much? Cuz I know ya homies back home is the only people telling you this shyt is dope.
Just face it... you garbage. You ain't gotta make all these excuses.
Average Coli Poster
IT mgmt/A&R/Sports Agent/DimePiece Slayer
If nikkas aint feeling it, nikkas aint feeling it. There's no mystery to it fukkboi. Ya shyt gahbage lil nikka 
observe
Banned
Ok..that's why my music and videos get stickied in the booth....sorry kid..I already battled gentle jones and ended his career on the coli..don't be the next victim..I'm not even gonna bother researching ya shyt for ammo..it's a waste of time..now if you wanna go song for song..we can do that..take your L
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
They do? Really? Cause if I recall, there's a recent post with a song from you that got NO replies. Come on YouNow and have a live battle of SONGS with me and we'll see who takes the L. You think that being on this site and trying to getr accepted by the other members and staying ONLY in this forum makes you a good rapper, lmao. I've rapped live for several people who love my shyt. I bet you've never even done an open mic. I have videos of my open mic performances. Where are yours?
The Dust King
A Childrens Story
"i jus shift my spinal column"
that was 30 sec in.
anyways not sure why you asked for opinions when you have all the answers and why you post your shyt on a site you dispise so much.
good luck on your endeavors
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
You're such an astute observer, lol. My exact words-"I'll set my city on my back/ I could shift my spinal column slip a disc and not collapse." It's amazing that someone with your levels of observation missed something like that. I mean, trying to figure out how lines connect to the other to set up something like that has got to be the hardest thing to do, right? Who said I despise this site? I just commented on what I observed from the daily posts and messages the members of this site have. Also from what I get called, even though it's blatantly obvious that I'm not white.