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DialeKt757

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breh you told people to let you know what they thought and then you just lash out at them :pachaha:

meanwhile @observe got them brazilian jungles junglin :banderas:
Sorry, I didn't know that I was supposed to let nikkas be disrespectful instead of giving just an opinion was what I was supposed to do. It's one thing to criticize, but when you do it in a hostile way, I'm gonna respond. Simple as that. You notice that I only was hostile towards those who are against me.
 

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Everything is done for a reason.

Bro, you asked cats to give you input, and that's exactly what they did. The only way you're gonna improve as an MC is by being open to constructive criticism. I see the potential, but you have to stop being so defensive, especially since you asked for people's opinions.
 

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Bro, you asked cats to give you input, and that's exactly what they did. The only way you're gonna improve as an MC is by being open to constructive criticism. I see the potential, but you have to stop being so defensive, especially since you asked for people's opinions.
I'm good as an MC. I know what I can do and have done. Most of these nikkas on here are too scared to do even an open mic. It's funny that y'all take one video and use that as the tell all be all for my skills, lol. Just wait for this video I'm gonna put up soon.
 

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Sorry, I didn't know that I was supposed to let nikkas be disrespectful instead of giving just an opinion was what I was supposed to do. It's one thing to criticize, but when you do it in a hostile way, I'm gonna respond. Simple as that. You notice that I only was hostile towards those who are against me.
im not gonna teach you the ways of the internet breh, have fun rapping
 

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Sorry, I didn't know that I was supposed to let nikkas be disrespectful instead of giving just an opinion was what I was supposed to do. It's one thing to criticize, but when you do it in a hostile way, I'm gonna respond. Simple as that. You notice that I only was hostile towards those who are against me.

You're on the Coli. You throw anything out there and you're open to all types of comments. But instead of being super sensitive you should focus on the input @JQ Legend, @the cac mamba, @MC Metaphysical , and others gave.
 

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You're such an astute observer, lol. My exact words-"I'll set my city on my back/ I could shift my spinal column slip a disc and not collapse." It's amazing that someone with your levels of observation missed something like that. I mean, trying to figure out how lines connect to the other to set up something like that has got to be the hardest thing to do, right? Who said I despise this site? I just commented on what I observed from the daily posts and messages the members of this site have. Also from what I get called, even though it's blatantly obvious that I'm not white.

i pointed out a particular off beat rhyme and in your mad rant you mentioned how i wasnt listening to you because you made no mention of a spinal cord

when unlike other posters i actually quoted you. your sarcasm falls on deaf ears and blind eyes since a "spinal cord" is the same as a "spinal column"

at this point your the epitomy of a mad rapper and if you cant take criticism from strangers you aint built for this.

your ranting and raving is unnecessary and shows your immaturity. you seem like a smart kid who can write, just practice more.
 

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i pointed out a particular off beat rhyme and in your mad rant you mentioned how i wasnt listening to you because you made no mention of a spinal cord

when unlike other posters i actually quoted you. your sarcasm falls on deaf ears and blind eyes since a "spinal cord" is the same as a "spinal column"

at this point your the epitomy of a mad rapper and if you cant take criticism from strangers you aint built for this.

your ranting and raving is unnecessary and shows your immaturity. you seem like a smart kid who can write, just practice more.
nikka my rhymes were never off beat, gtfoh with that shyt. It's one thing to give an opinion, but making shyt up isn't a good thing. Also, you act like that line was bad because I used that? That's crazy. It's all good, though. y'all want a performance? You're gonna get one.
 

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shyts trash and you're trash and a fakkit who can't take constructive criticism. You'll never have a career and will be 40 bagging appliances at your local Target. Get this Cac shyt outta here :camby:


You think I give a fukk about what your bum ass thinks? I've got plenty of fans and people who support my music outside of this site. No one gives a fukk that you're a moderator, either. Take your bytch ass back to wherever the fukk you crawled out of fukk nikka.
 
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No one can give advice on how to rap..you just have enough practice..like @horse. kills said,,,they bump my music in the favelas of Brazil..

And yes I have done open mics in the past..you're not special
lol okay yet you won't go live with me in front of an audience so that we can both be judged by random, unbiased people. fukk this site, that's what matters for real. If you can't get people to feel you on that level, then no one is gonna bump your shyt. At the end of the day, all of these comments don't mean shyt. I care more about the fact that all of the RANDOM people on the internet I perform for LIVE feel my shyt. Stop being a scared little bytch and accept the challenge. I know why you won't, though. You know that I would eat you up in front of those people.
 

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lol okay yet you won't go live with me in front of an audience so that we can both be judged by random, unbiased people. fukk this site, that's what matters for real. If you can't get people to feel you on that level, then no one is gonna bump your shyt. At the end of the day, all of these comments don't mean shyt. I care more about the fact that all of the RANDOM people on the internet I perform for LIVE feel my shyt. Stop being a scared little bytch and accept the challenge. I know why you won't, though. You know that I would eat you up in front of those people.

No ones ever called me wack you lil fukker...the fact that 90% of the people in this thread think youre wack says something..I tried to be nice after I was talking shyt about ya rhymes last month..but now you wanna call the best rapper on the coli which is me wack..you don't have enough mental strength to fukk with @observe
 
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