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@DrX gets hired to make visuals for Hidden Colors 5. Just before Tariq Nasheed sends off the check that will allow him to escape the misery that is Buffalo NY, @Big Daddy runs up on on all fours and uses his Talons to slash Tariq. He survives but is badly injured and needs help. @Big Daddy holds Tariq hostage and @DrX is the only one that can go and save him.

@DrX must use his connections from TheColi to hitchhike from Buffalo NY to Southern California where Tariq lives. Getting rides and staying at Coli members houses along the way. He gets help from his Android sidekick @ThreeLetterAgency who guides him using the data that gets uploaded to the USB port in his rear end.

His first stop is NYC where he seeks out @Brooklynzson and @cook. He comes to find out @Brooklynzson is held prisoner in the bowels of Rikers Island where he's tasked with posting the latest trash mixtapes from Lil Yachty, Kodack Black, 21 Savage, and the like. @Brooklynzson reveals that @cook is not one man but a large group of shadowy figures which includes Eric Schmidt, Lyor Cohen, George Soros and many more. They have a complex Internet network (YacubNet) which they use to take ideas from TheColi enrich their companies and implement White Supremacy across the globe.

On the way to Tariq Nasheed, @DrX must deal with many foes such as Jesse Lee Peterson who has been in the lab working on rebuilding the family, by rebuilding the man. In order to improve black men, he has gene spliced the DNA of black men with what he believes to be a noble, scavenging creature of the night-- The Racc00n! :c00nin:Something goes terribly wrong. Some of the Racc00ns have rabies which was dormant. It turns some of the Manc00ns into wild feral creatures who eat people and pass the virus along.

Other foes @DrX must escape from include racist cops, the septum ring wearing Bwenches and their queen @WHIPPEDCream and @Poitier and the Coli Agents.

Also starring:
Sensai @Mowgli who teaches @DrX the secret Air Choke, Bmore Gorilla and his pet (Harambe Lives!), the wise and eccentric MILF @Sanityoverated, @BrothaZay and his talking tractor trailer @Pullup, @Mr. Somebody, Black Hebrew Israelites (Thats right!), K-Rino, @EmperorReinscarf and GMB, @Yuffie the Angry Comedian, @3Rivers the Visionary, and more!!!

  • Will @DrX save Tariq Nasheed in time?
  • Will he defeat Jesse Lee Peterson and the Manc00ns?
  • Will he get over his trauma and disdain of white folk to trust VegasCac and #CacSet?
  • Will YacubNet be destroyed?
  • Will TheColi survive?
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@DrX gets hired to make visuals for Hidden Colors 5. Just before Tariq Nasheed sends off the check that will allow him to escape the misery that is Buffalo NY, @Big Daddy runs up on on all fours and uses his Talons to slash Tariq. He survives but is badly injured and needs help. @Big Daddy holds Tariq hostage and @DrX is the only one that can go and save him.

@DrX must use his connections from TheColi to hitchhike from Buffalo NY to Southern California where Tariq lives. Getting rides and staying at Coli members houses along the way. He gets help from his Android sidekick @ThreeLetterAgency who guides him using the data that gets uploaded to the USB port in his rear end.

His first stop is NYC where he seeks out @Brooklynzson and @cook. He comes to find out @Brooklynzson is held prisoner in the bowels of Rikers Island where he's tasked with posting the latest trash mixtapes from Lil Yachty, Kodack Black, 21 Savage, and the like. @Brooklynzson reveals that @cook is not one man but a large group of shadowy figures which includes Eric Schmidt, Lyor Cohen, George Soros and many more. They have a complex Internet network (YacubNet) which they use to take ideas from TheColi enrich their companies and implement White Supremacy across the globe.

On the way to Tariq Nasheed, @DrX must deal with many foes such as Jesse Lee Peterson who has been in the lab working on rebuilding the family, by rebuilding the man. In order to improve black men, he has gene spliced the DNA of black men with what he believes to be a noble, scavenging creature of the night-- The Racc00n! :c00nin:Something goes terribly wrong. Some of the Racc00ns have rabies which was dormant. It turns some of the Manc00ns into wild feral creatures who eat people and pass the virus along.

Other foes @DrX must escape from include racist cops, the septum ring wearing Bwenches and their queen @Whipped Queen, and @Potier and the Coli Agents.

Also starring:
Sensai @Mowgli who teaches @DrX the secret Air Choke, Bmore Gorilla and his pet (Harambe Lives!), the wise and eccentric MILF @Sanity Overated, @BrothaZay and his talking tractor trailer @Pullup, @Mr. Somebody, Black Hebrew Israelites (Thats right!), K-Rino, @EmperorReinscarf and GMB, @Yuffie the Angry Comedian, @3Rivers the Visionary, and more!!!

  • Will @DrX save Tariq Nasheed in time?
  • Will he defeat Jesse Lee Peterson and the Manc00ns?
  • Will he get over his trauma and disdain of white folk to trust VegasCac and #CacSet?
  • Will YacubNet be destroyed?
  • Will TheColi survive?
:lupe:

:whew: You should seriously consider writing fiction.
 

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@DrX gets hired to make visuals for Hidden Colors 5. Just before Tariq Nasheed sends off the check that will allow him to escape the misery that is Buffalo NY, @Big Daddy runs up on on all fours and uses his Talons to slash Tariq. He survives but is badly injured and needs help. @Big Daddy holds Tariq hostage and @DrX is the only one that can go and save him.

@DrX must use his connections from TheColi to hitchhike from Buffalo NY to Southern California where Tariq lives. Getting rides and staying at Coli members houses along the way. He gets help from his Android sidekick @ThreeLetterAgency who guides him using the data that gets uploaded to the USB port in his rear end.

His first stop is NYC where he seeks out @Brooklynzson and @cook. He comes to find out @Brooklynzson is held prisoner in the bowels of Rikers Island where he's tasked with posting the latest trash mixtapes from Lil Yachty, Kodack Black, 21 Savage, and the like. @Brooklynzson reveals that @cook is not one man but a large group of shadowy figures which includes Eric Schmidt, Lyor Cohen, George Soros and many more. They have a complex Internet network (YacubNet) which they use to take ideas from TheColi enrich their companies and implement White Supremacy across the globe.

On the way to Tariq Nasheed, @DrX must deal with many foes such as Jesse Lee Peterson who has been in the lab working on rebuilding the family, by rebuilding the man. In order to improve black men, he has gene spliced the DNA of black men with what he believes to be a noble, scavenging creature of the night-- The Racc00n! :c00nin:Something goes terribly wrong. Some of the Racc00ns have rabies which was dormant. It turns some of the Manc00ns into wild feral creatures who eat people and pass the virus along.

Other foes @DrX must escape from include racist cops, the septum ring wearing Bwenches and their queen @WHIPPEDCream and @Poitier and the Coli Agents.

Also starring:
Sensai @Mowgli who teaches @DrX the secret Air Choke, Bmore Gorilla and his pet (Harambe Lives!), the wise and eccentric MILF @Sanity Overated, @BrothaZay and his talking tractor trailer @Pullup, @Mr. Somebody, Black Hebrew Israelites (Thats right!), K-Rino, @EmperorReinscarf and GMB, @Yuffie the Angry Comedian, @3Rivers the Visionary, and more!!!

  • Will @DrX save Tariq Nasheed in time?
  • Will he defeat Jesse Lee Peterson and the Manc00ns?
  • Will he get over his trauma and disdain of white folk to trust VegasCac and #CacSet?
  • Will YacubNet be destroyed?
  • Will TheColi survive?
:lupe:

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@DrX gets hired to make visuals for Hidden Colors 5. Just before Tariq Nasheed sends off the check that will allow him to escape the misery that is Buffalo NY, @Big Daddy runs up on on all fours and uses his Talons to slash Tariq. He survives but is badly injured and needs help. @Big Daddy holds Tariq hostage and @DrX is the only one that can go and save him.

@DrX must use his connections from TheColi to hitchhike from Buffalo NY to Southern California where Tariq lives. Getting rides and staying at Coli members houses along the way. He gets help from his Android sidekick @ThreeLetterAgency who guides him using the data that gets uploaded to the USB port in his rear end.

His first stop is NYC where he seeks out @Brooklynzson and @cook. He comes to find out @Brooklynzson is held prisoner in the bowels of Rikers Island where he's tasked with posting the latest trash mixtapes from Lil Yachty, Kodack Black, 21 Savage, and the like. @Brooklynzson reveals that @cook is not one man but a large group of shadowy figures which includes Eric Schmidt, Lyor Cohen, George Soros and many more. They have a complex Internet network (YacubNet) which they use to take ideas from TheColi enrich their companies and implement White Supremacy across the globe.

On the way to Tariq Nasheed, @DrX must deal with many foes such as Jesse Lee Peterson who has been in the lab working on rebuilding the family, by rebuilding the man. In order to improve black men, he has gene spliced the DNA of black men with what he believes to be a noble, scavenging creature of the night-- The Racc00n! :c00nin:Something goes terribly wrong. Some of the Racc00ns have rabies which was dormant. It turns some of the Manc00ns into wild feral creatures who eat people and pass the virus along.

Other foes @DrX must escape from include racist cops, the septum ring wearing Bwenches and their queen @WHIPPEDCream and @Poitier and the Coli Agents.

Also starring:
Sensai @Mowgli who teaches @DrX the secret Air Choke, Bmore Gorilla and his pet (Harambe Lives!), the wise and eccentric MILF @Sanity Overated, @BrothaZay and his talking tractor trailer @Pullup, @Mr. Somebody, Black Hebrew Israelites (Thats right!), K-Rino, @EmperorReinscarf and GMB, @Yuffie the Angry Comedian, @3Rivers the Visionary, and more!!!

  • Will @DrX save Tariq Nasheed in time?
  • Will he defeat Jesse Lee Peterson and the Manc00ns?
  • Will he get over his trauma and disdain of white folk to trust VegasCac and #CacSet?
  • Will YacubNet be destroyed?
  • Will TheColi survive?
:lupe:
This is some concise writing :wow: might get sued by Tariq though
 

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This is some concise writing :wow: might get sued by Tariq though

We can take him out then... and add a totally new character.... Rafiq Ramadan.

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persons is purely coincidental.:youngsabo:
 

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@DrX gets hired to make visuals for Hidden Colors 5. Just before Tariq Nasheed sends off the check that will allow him to escape the misery that is Buffalo NY, @Big Daddy runs up on on all fours and uses his Talons to slash Tariq. He survives but is badly injured and needs help. @Big Daddy holds Tariq hostage and @DrX is the only one that can go and save him.

@DrX must use his connections from TheColi to hitchhike from Buffalo NY to Southern California where Tariq lives. Getting rides and staying at Coli members houses along the way. He gets help from his Android sidekick @ThreeLetterAgency who guides him using the data that gets uploaded to the USB port in his rear end.

His first stop is NYC where he seeks out @Brooklynzson and @cook. He comes to find out @Brooklynzson is held prisoner in the bowels of Rikers Island where he's tasked with posting the latest trash mixtapes from Lil Yachty, Kodack Black, 21 Savage, and the like. @Brooklynzson reveals that @cook is not one man but a large group of shadowy figures which includes Eric Schmidt, Lyor Cohen, George Soros and many more. They have a complex Internet network (YacubNet) which they use to take ideas from TheColi enrich their companies and implement White Supremacy across the globe.

On the way to Tariq Nasheed, @DrX must deal with many foes such as Jesse Lee Peterson who has been in the lab working on rebuilding the family, by rebuilding the man. In order to improve black men, he has gene spliced the DNA of black men with what he believes to be a noble, scavenging creature of the night-- The Racc00n! :c00nin:Something goes terribly wrong. Some of the Racc00ns have rabies which was dormant. It turns some of the Manc00ns into wild feral creatures who eat people and pass the virus along.

Other foes @DrX must escape from include racist cops, the septum ring wearing Bwenches and their queen @WHIPPEDCream and @Poitier and the Coli Agents.

Also starring:
Sensai @Mowgli who teaches @DrX the secret Air Choke, Bmore Gorilla and his pet (Harambe Lives!), the wise and eccentric MILF @Sanityoverated, @BrothaZay and his talking tractor trailer @Pullup, @Mr. Somebody, Black Hebrew Israelites (Thats right!), K-Rino, @EmperorReinscarf and GMB, @Yuffie the Angry Comedian, @3Rivers the Visionary, and more!!!

  • Will @DrX save Tariq Nasheed in time?
  • Will he defeat Jesse Lee Peterson and the Manc00ns?
  • Will he get over his trauma and disdain of white folk to trust VegasCac and #CacSet?
  • Will YacubNet be destroyed?
  • Will TheColi survive?
:lupe:
Writing is a very creative endeavor friend so good luck in your writing but please have a happy ending where the believers of God win because otherwise what kind of tale are you telling? Yes friend a demonic one and we don't want that like wrong orders at the drive through. :heh:
 

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Writing is a very creative endeavor friend so good luck in your writing but please have a happy ending where the believers of God win because otherwise what kind of tale are you telling? Yes friend a demonic one and we don't want that like wrong orders at the drive through. :heh:
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