I think you need at least one more head to bounce the conversation around, it'll help reduce the redundancy and trailing off. If not, try editing down to only show your stinger comments. Talking head shows are always better when you're having a conversation about the topics UNLESS you're trying to make a point, then you'd have to go for more of the stinger comments.
Sound quality is a lot better than I expected so no much to improve there. You're pretty clear and concise. No static, reverb is good, sounds like you're in a small room as opposed to an auditorium.
As far as your topics go, is that what you want to do? Your take on the news? You want to be like The Young Turks? I agree with
@Michael9100, do more obscure topics, more personal shyt, things you have more passion for instead of commenting on mundane shyt because if you don't give a fukk about them, we won't.
Good luck on whatever you decide to do. Will be listening.