Lets analyze the 3rd verse in "America" Nas.

[Brandon M.]

Assassinations diplomatic relations
Killed indigenous people built a new nation
Involuntary labor took a knife split a woman naval
Took her premature baby let her man see you rape her
If I could travel to the 1700's
I'd push a wheelbarrow full of dynamite through your covenant
Love to sit in on the senate and tell the whole government
Y'all don't treat women fair she read about herself in the bible
Believin she the reason sin is here
You played her with an apron like bring me my dinner dear
She's the '******' here ain't we in the free world?
Death penalty in texas kill young boys and girls
Barbarity I'm in the double-R casually
Buggin how I made it out the hood dazzle me
How far we really from third world savagery
When the empire fall imagine how crazy that'll be


this verse deals with the mistreatment of women .....2 pac once said in an interview, women always lead to the killing of a man

 

[intilectual recipricol]

aint nothin to analyze in these lyrics b.... fukk you naS stans be on? I swear I gotta find out the fukk be on yall nikkaz birds, man...

 

[Eternal Tecate]

Not a lot to analyze shyt's pretty straight forward but this verse is

 

[intilectual recipricol]

Not a lot to analyze shyt's pretty straight forward but this verse is

shyts garbage... on the real, how are you naS stans so easily impressed by below average shyt?

 

[AkaDemiK]

i fukking love that Verse. How is this man not the goat?

 

[Ronald]

i fukking love that Verse. How is this man not the goat?

Well he is the GOAT

but Jay Elec wrote that verse

 

[AkaDemiK]

Well he is the GOAT

but Jay Elec wrote that verse

man....fukk up outta here

 

[intilectual recipricol]

man....fukk up outta here

literally anyone could have penned that simple ass shyt... looks like typical smart dumb nikka shyt... this aint even hatin, im tryin to figger how yall are so easily impressed

 

[Brandon M.]

why j elec cant write another verse like this for himself then fukk outta here clowns

 

[mr.africa]

the entire song is just too dope. third verse though is just pure wizardry imo!!! GOLDEN CHILD!!!!

 

[mobbinfms]

Assassinations diplomatic relations
Killed indigenous people built a new nation
Involuntary labor took a knife split a woman naval
Took her premature baby let her man see you rape her
If I could travel to the 1700's
I'd push a wheelbarrow full of dynamite through your covenant
Love to sit in on the senate and tell the whole government
Y'all don't treat women fair she read about herself in the bible
Believin she the reason sin is here
You played her with an apron like bring me my dinner dear
She's the '******' here ain't we in the free world?
Death penalty in texas kill young boys and girls
Barbarity I'm in the double-R casually
Buggin how I made it out the hood dazzle me
How far we really from third world savagery
When the empire fall imagine how crazy that'll be


this verse deals with the mistreatment of women .....2 pac once said in an interview, women always lead to the killing of a man

The structure of the verse is very unorthodox. He dropped knowledge on this too. Just look at how many points/topics he covered.

 

[mr.africa]

literally anyone could have penned that simple ass shyt... looks like typical smart dumb nikka shyt... this aint even hatin, im tryin to figger how yall are so easily impressed

not hating, yeah right. just look at all the topics he touched on. the structure of the verse is also incredible. i know you're a nas hater, but just give the man his due on this one. that shyt is dope. Peace i'm out!!!!!!

 

[Foxmulder]

Well he is the GOAT

but Jay Elec wrote that verse

 

[intilectual recipricol]

not hating, yeah right. just look at all the topics he touched on. the structure of the verse is also incredible. i know you're a nas hater, but just give the man his due on this one. that shyt is dope. Peace i'm out!!!!!!

im not hatin I just find EVERYTHING about that verse below average... EVERYTHING. I havent heard or read a Jay Elec verse thats worse so I dont really think he wrote that shyt. the structure is extremely average. I can pull any random song from any number of rappers and the structure will be better. the content was so light weight its not even worth mentioning.

Compare that weak ass shyt to Lupe's Freedom Aint Free or Unforgivable Youth or bytch Bad its just a fukkin mismatch on all levels.

 

[Billy Ocean]

Well he is the GOAT

but Jay Elec wrote that verse

Shut your corny ass up