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One of his illest verses ever.. And thats saying a lot....
it must hurt somewhere on a deep level, that your idols(lupe, jay,...) studied this 'unremarkable' artists work to better their craft!! shyt wasn't lighweight. far from it. i already told you why i like it. the different topics he touches on in one verse and doing it in a clear and concise manner and the stucture of the verse is complex plus he switches flows at least twice in the verse. VERY DOPE!! lupe has lost the ability to make an engaging song ages ago. still like him, but he is so hit and miss since the cool and hasn't done it nearly as long as nas has, but already has fallen off! TRUTH!!!!!!im not hatin I just find EVERYTHING about that verse below average... EVERYTHING. I havent heard or read a Jay Elec verse thats worse so I dont really think he wrote that shyt. the structure is extremely average. I can pull any random song from any number of rappers and the structure will be better. the content was so light weight its not even worth mentioning.
Compare that weak ass shyt to Lupe's Freedom Aint Free or Unforgivable Youth or bytch Bad its just a fukkin mismatch on all levels.
im not hatin I just find EVERYTHING about that verse below average... EVERYTHING. I havent heard or read a Jay Elec verse thats worse so I dont really think he wrote that shyt. the structure is extremely average. I can pull any random song from any number of rappers and the structure will be better. the content was so light weight its not even worth mentioning.
Compare that weak ass shyt to Lupe's Freedom Aint Free or Unforgivable Youth or bytch Bad its just a fukkin mismatch on all levels.
Well he is the GOAT
but Jay Elec wrote that verse
If the verse was so below average, can you name 50 clearly superior verses from 2008 that dealt with the same subject matter (oppression of women in America)?im not hatin I just find EVERYTHING about that verse below average... EVERYTHING. I havent heard or read a Jay Elec verse thats worse so I dont really think he wrote that shyt. the structure is extremely average. I can pull any random song from any number of rappers and the structure will be better. the content was so light weight its not even worth mentioning.
Compare that weak ass shyt to Lupe's Freedom Aint Free or Unforgivable Youth or bytch Bad its just a fukkin mismatch on all levels.
Jay Elec wrote that verse