I'm gonna give you some honest criticism. The problem w today is anybody can buy pro tools, record a song n make a video n put it out. I dono how long you've been rapping for but it seems to me like it hasn't been a long time (if it has
). First off, you need to work on your lyrics and delivery...like A LOT. If you want ppl to view you in the same league as some of these other new dudes who r hot, you're music better stand up against them. Not saying you need to go the lyrical route, but u need something to stand out whether it b your flow, personality, ability to write hooks, or beat selection (which brings me to my next point). Your beats are not good, and if that's the case, ppl are gonna cut your song off immediately. U gotta think about it like this, ppls attention spans r like maybe 10-20 seconds TOPS...maybe 30 seconds if the visuals r good, which yours aren't. What I suggest is you make as many records as humanly possible, keep at it and don't let haters discourage u. But also don't b blind to constructive criticism n build on your weaknesses. When you're ready ppl will let u know. Also, Keep friends around that know HipHop n aren't gonna b yes men and big up your music cuz they're ur boys, even tho in their hearts they think ur songs aren't good. Trust me, when u get better u will know and you'll look back on ur early shyt like
But I'm lettin u kno now, if u keep droppin corny videos w gun remotes
dressing the way u do, ur setting yourself up for disaster. Take this how u want but I'm telling u the truth, which may sting, but will help u in the long run if ur really serious. God bless u...
you followed the formula so do you
