all these examples are terrible.
It's pretty much impossible for a freestyle to be better than the original song. Songs are more than just verses.
I don't know if this counts, but this was close to being as good as "Cobra"
Some rap songs are just verses though
With no hook or a very simple hook. Or a hook that's just more bars. Look at You Ain't a Killer.
Look at Protect Your Neck for example.
Remix king, max bodied everythingeverythingmax b on jeezys Bottom of the map pops up instantly.