Lupe: the GOAT gangsta rapper

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Ya hopefully
hand over the
Land Rover keys
slowly
and run like hosiery
I move eggs like ovaries

worth my weight you impersonate
nikkaz like Miller Lite
spit it right, end ya life
terminate
Im the worst case scenario
bump heads for coins like Mario
pop more rounds than merry-go
from birth date to burial
in South Beach, bytches goin south wit they mouthpiece
without speech
oh now hes official from the start
they miss you, holdin vigils in the dark

always been a quiet cat not the meanest muthafukka type
for a hunnid grand plus I'll be buffin brass knucks
best listen to your dawgs, get son of sam'd up

:wow:

 

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I made it to the finish line first but Lu's a loser
I wanted to watch, so I turned to rocks like Medusa

:wow:
 

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Bumped :youngsabo:

"You a coward, cousin
Type to go into a crowd and bust it
I'm a stand-up nikka, hold straps like crowded buses"
:merchant:

You pumpin' pies? :what:
Punks, you sweet like pumpkin pies :russ:
Lick nikkas, take the icing off you Duncan Hines
:damn:
Bucking nines, duck behind trucks and signs

Can't spell nikka?? Ain't no I in shot
Ain't no you in hot
No question, ain't no why (y?) in Was
:banderas:
 

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I'm slick I slde, I don't slip I ride
Don't flip I grind when the shyt hits the fan
Like a line drive into the stands
The shoe fits the foot the mitt fits the hand
Misfits hollow tips hits ya man

the wordplay :banderas:

not bad.

I then checked the Absolute freestyle and this is why I don't fukk with Lu: his flow is horrendous.
 

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I'm not hearing it breh

His flow is insane on these joints, don't hear him off beat even once.

Aight... let's go this line by line.

"You know
My mind remain on gunplay
While y'all nikkas sleep like Jermaine on Sunday
The heat stay packed like the train on Monday"

OK. good start.

"Yes, I lick off"
http://genius.com/842035/Lupe-fiasc...s-i-lick-off-the-time-you-gotta-be-there-nine
huh? nikka's sounding awkward already just trying to switch out of the rhythm he established.


"the time you gotta be there, (nine)

meh. Lackluster end to the 4th bar.

"Push by the time that you get off (five)
And I pump 8's till I reach lunch break (twelve)"

Did I miss something? What rhymed with "lunch break?" shyt threw me off.

"It's bout the time that you get home (that's six)
That's the gist homes"

OK. Back on beat.

"That's the unofficial master plan
Minus any unforeseen traffic jams"


That "minus any unforeseen traffic jams" is a shytty end to the bar. It's offbeat and clunky as fukk

"Like my songs carrying the clubs like Bagger Vance
Or getting' caught by them long arms
Like Mr. Fantastic damn

But I can't fade like Fantastic Sams and taper off
I'm a better nikka man this is Edward Scissorhands with my back against the wall"

There is no groove in any of this.

I'm done here.
 

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Aight... let's go this line by line.

"You know
My mind remain on gunplay
While y'all nikkas sleep like Jermaine on Sunday
The heat stay packed like the train on Monday"

OK. good start.

"Yes, I lick off"
huh? nikka's sounding awkward already just trying to switch out of the rhythm he established.

"the time you gotta be there, (nine)

meh. Lackluster end to the 4th bar.

"Push by the time that you get off (five)
And I pump 8's till I reach lunch break (twelve)"

Did I miss something? What rhymed with "lunch break?" shyt threw me off.

"It's bout the time that you get home (that's six)
That's the gist homes"

OK. Back on beat.

"That's the unofficial master plan
Minus any unforeseen traffic jams"


That "minus any unforeseen traffic jams" is a shytty end to the bar. It's offbeat and clunky as fukk

"Like my songs carrying the clubs like Bagger Vance
Or getting' caught by them long arms
Like Mr. Fantastic damn

But I can't fade like Fantastic Sams and taper off
I'm a better nikka man this is Edward Scissorhands with my back against the wall"

There is no groove in any of this.

I'm done here.
We'll have to agree to disagree. :yeshrug:
Lu's flow insane, Recognize the genius :ufdup:

And pump 8's rhymes with lunch breaks

Complex internal rhymes :whew:
 
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