Lyricism. All criticism welcomed.

[Im Kemet Rocky & I like penis]

I gotta applaud how quickly you recorded this after the earth quake.

Fred.

ohh shyt..

hurricane katrina hit..

 

[DialeKt757]

all three of your verses were dope but I think your second verse should be on another another song. It would make the song perfect in my opinion. 3 verses drags it out too long. Really dope hook also!!!! P

I appreciate it man.

 

[DialeKt757]

I gotta applaud how quickly you recorded this after the earth quake.

Fred.

lol my friend who was recording it was pretty fukked up. It was hard for him to hold the camera straight, smh.

 

[Ronnie Lott]

My freestyles better than ya writtens b

 

[DialeKt757]

lol

 

[hex]

That shyt was actually pretty dope.

Fred.

 

[DialeKt757]

That shyt was actually pretty dope.

Fred.

No doubt. I appreciate the feedback negro

 

[DialeKt757]

foh cac

The first verse is dedicated to you nikka.

 

[FreshAIG]

Yes, I know my breath control could've been better. Blame it on the meds. Just listen and give me feedback.

Wack

 

[Pop123]

i likes, i likes. the breath control only sounds suspect cause u doing that shyt live, one take. in the studio you can punch, so you'll be aiight. the voice could have a little more hunger, that's the only negative i got for ya. keep it up kid,

 

[Pop123]

yall similar, but she got that fire in her voice

 

[DialeKt757]

Wack

lol ok. You're entitled to your opinion.

 

[Im Kemet Rocky & I like penis]

The first verse is dedicated to you nikka.

eat a dikk cac..

 

[D1renegade]

Not bad, but don't waste anymore time putting out these kind of videos. You should get some real recording equipment and put this on wax.

 

[the cac mamba]

ecko in 2014