Malcom Rhyme King, come analyze my lyrics for me

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@Malcom Rhyme King You've spelled your own name wrong, but I still want to get your input on this little jingle I came up with. I'm starting a new job, and I want to hit the company with something dope to get a commercial to get business booming...

Put your hands up high people across the land
This is the place to be, for all woman or man
We know you wanna fill your belly with the tasty viddles
Got the combos to make ya clap like OJ’s acquittal
Fries that cross your eyes, shakes make your heart perculate
Oh the finger licking magic, that’s just half of it
Is your car acting funny? Getting bad looks from the hunnies?
We’ll tune your ride up tight as you munch our chicken bites
A tire rotation is not a problem, oil change with the quickness
We’re not Wayman Tinsdale, but we are Strictly Business
So come on down! You don’t want to hesitate
Come check us out, Billy’s Burgers & Brakes
 
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