"My Introduction" video just hit 185,000 views..Coli We Feasting!!

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Behind the scenes at the Halloween Music Video

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damn right....kill em wit success

jus watched the first video sh*t was dope. nice flow and nice lyrics. first verse was superior to the second based off of the opening bar. the second verse opening was not as strong as the first. the whole backflip thing felt like unnecessary rhymes or could've been worded more cleverly.

lol @ the lucille reference.

I appreciated the view of downtown, video was dope. pretty sure I wouldn't say that about all the other videos shot in parking lots.

nice shooting too.

what would make me a fan is to know yu don't rap on generic south beats, with those clone snares etc. this soul type beat is dope.

also thought you took too many breaks during the verses. didn't mind em all but I would've appreciated less pauses more bars.

lol @ your hand motions when yu said "I'm gettin head blindfolded". good sh*t. this did not feel amatuer to me.
 

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jus watched the first video sh*t was dope. nice flow and nice lyrics. first verse was superior to the second based off of the opening bar. the second verse opening was not as strong as the first. the whole backflip thing felt like unnecessary rhymes or could've been worded more cleverly.

lol @ the lucille reference.

I appreciated the view of downtown, video was dope. pretty sure I wouldn't say that about all the other videos shot in parking lots.

nice shooting too.

what would make me a fan is to know yu don't rap on generic south beats, with those clone snares etc. this soul type beat is dope.

also thought you took too many breaks during the verses. didn't mind em all but I would've appreciated less pauses more bars.

lol @ your hand motions when yu said "I'm gettin head blindfolded". good sh*t. this did not feel amatuer to me.



thanks for the feedback and honest criticism homie. the part where i took breaks was supposed to be room for like a hook, but i wanted to talk to the people so they could FEEL ME. and as far as beats, i dont like like rappin on the typical southern beats, i like different shyt. check out my mixtape Digital Dope....the link is in my sig. check this video out too, u might like it:

 
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was ready to hate - pleasantly surprised. great job. most rappers coming up now are garbage but you have something for sure. :obama:
 
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