My stand up career is really thriving: first headlining gig (video)

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Ava-tar baby, house ******, aracnig, sounds like shyt racist cacs come up with, and not to mention it's inconsistent with your later material on race which unnecessarily takes away a lot of the inherent tension, weakening the release from the punchlines.
 

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I wen through a stand-up comedy phase (as a spectator) but thought most of them were disappointing, so haven't went to a show in years (also stopped drinking, so what's the point). A lot of your stuff was funny to me and irreverent so it was cool. The first five minutes was fire, then i went back to not liking stand-up again so cut it off 15 mintues into your segment. U got one fan. Just not my preferred form of entertainment. I appreciate you sharing this.




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Ava-tar baby, house ******, aracnig, sounds like shyt racist cacs come up with, and not to mention it's inconsistent with your later material on race which unnecessarily takes away a lot of the inherent tension, weakening the release from the punchlines.
That's deliberate. Not to weaken but to contrast and make it known that anyone can get it. But rewatching it, i totally agree with you. A lot of those one liners are also per request but i notice a disconnect.

Edit: i also tell those jokes as a trap but i didnt do the bit. I normally say "now i know whose a racist"
 

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That's deliberate. Not to weaken but to contrast and make it known that anyone can get it. But rewatching it, i totally agree with you. A lot of those one liners are also per request but i notice a disconnect.

Edit: i also tell those jokes as a trap but i didnt do the bit. I normally say "now i know whose a racist"

Yea a good trap always gets a nice pop from the crowd, Patrice was a master at it:
 

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ill watch later but do ya thing brotha
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