My stand up career is really thriving: first headlining gig (video)
- Thread starter End Cruelty
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I hate when nikkas use slang words the wrong way.
fukking corn ball...
Didn't watch the ops video but I will still give this black man props for getting out there and doing something.
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Yuffie butter!
I'd suggest watching the rest. It's not all one liners but right on. It's actually mostly personal stories.
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Yuffie butter!
I try to be honest"I get sexy and dance around because I'm dead on the inside"
- Shakespeare
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Yuffie butter!
i cant sit thru these types of jokes with this kinda crowd...but props for doing what u like
I feel you. Just curious, how far did you watch?
QuintessentialBM
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It was ok.... about what I expected. I missed the tar baby joke, however, what stood out negatively was the black women & diabetes monolouge..... get rid of both if you want any respect from black people as a serious comedian. The Comedy Central/white amateur comedy club crowds will eat that BS up, as they did in this set. Your set shouldn't be a "bash whitey" monolouge, but you need not go in on black people.
There were a few bright spots were you had the crowd and moments where the crowd was dead. The key to great comedy is to have your audience continuously laughing. Also, if your set up is dry(not funnny; takes too long to get to the punchline) you'll lose your audience. This was free game. Next time, I'll charge.
Like I said, you were ok. You got a decent applause(not a standing ovation, not boo'd off the stage). That should count for something.
There were a few bright spots were you had the crowd and moments where the crowd was dead. The key to great comedy is to have your audience continuously laughing. Also, if your set up is dry(not funnny; takes too long to get to the punchline) you'll lose your audience. This was free game. Next time, I'll charge.
Like I said, you were ok. You got a decent applause(not a standing ovation, not boo'd off the stage). That should count for something.
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Yuffie butter!
Thanks for the feedback but if you arent a comedian or a booker trying to pay, I'm not dropping anything. Also, black folks laugh at it so I'm sort of confused by what you're talking about. My goal isn't to get black people to respect me, my goal is to get paid for expressing myself. But yeah, thanks for the feedback, again.
I hate to be that dude that posts and then say eff you to the response but I find it incredibly disrespectful when folks try to speak for all black people. Like, should I dance more and talk about p*ssy? Should I be a stereotype and reference all the latest slang? I'm not that dude in real life, so I don't do it on stage. I wont be paying for your next session of game, slick. Lol. That's personal but fukk it. I'll let it fly.
i clicked to a random part and i heard slavery and saw cacs laughing. it was enough for me.
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Yuffie butter!
Very refined.
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Yuffie butter!
Positive as always
I'm a bit of a stand up comedy head. I chuckled. I couldn't tell if you were serious or kidding half of the time - which I believe was the reason why most of the pople in back of you wern't laughing that much as well. Some of the material needs to be a bit more silly if you want to sell it check Chappelle's Sesame Street bit or Gangster Baby bit for what I'm referencing.
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Yuffie butter!
I get that a lot. I'll probably keep it more deadpan for that kind of crowd. I normally get goofier when it's a lot of old people.Goofier doesn't mean older. You comedy is already goofy but like I said unless you give me a sense that you're kidding it goes across as weird. No offence intended.