need feedback on my tutorials i made for street fighter

[pointproven214]

 

[GreenGrass]

you could do some voice commentary but this is good. i hope you make lots of money out of this

 

[pointproven214]

you could do some voice commentary but this is good. i hope you make lots of money out of this

lmao smh i would love for u to make a video on this i bet it would be informative smh lmao.

 

[GreenGrass]

lmao smh i would love for u to make a video on this i bet it would be informative smh lmao.

don't give me ideas.. i need to stay away from the computer.. depression, breh. it really sucks.. but kudos to you. i wish you nothing but great success. find a way to monetize your work.

 

[Saint1]

I have no clue what's going on. It needs a commentary breakdown. And chop up the video to just show the parts where it's happening. Anything else is distracting.

 

[pointproven214]

I have no clue what's going on. It needs a commentary breakdown. And chop up the video to just show the parts where it's happening. Anything else is distracting.

u a idiot that's all

 

[Food Mane]

Pretty good. They could use a few more multis though.

 

[MrPentatonic]

voice commentary is the way forward, better visual presentation too

 

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u a idiot that's all

seriously?

 

[Saint1]

u a idiot that's all

and you the one asking for help. how about this.

1. type out the word "you" instead of using "u" what are you fifteen?
2. The text in the beginning looks like a fukking child wrote it. White text on a grey background? GTFOH. No one wants to read a paragraph on a fukking VIDEO. but I guess that makes sense now because you're stupid.
3. I said you should use your voice but you probably don't have balls and got a squeaky ass voice. use bullet points for the text and apply to boyz ii men cover group you can be the high pitch bytch.
4. You ain't helping no one with these are trash videos, help yourself
5. Stop eating dikks and get some p*ssy

you're welcome hoe.