Need TheBooth's thoughts on My Rapping

[MenacingMonk]

I wasn't gonna post this is in The Tunnel since I don't know how many heads peep that section, so I decided to post it here. Anyways, I wanna get feedback from you cats; negative or positive, it's cool.

I wanna let you know that my vocals aren't mixed or mastered since I don't have a program, which will explain why they're rough. Also, I know I need to work on pronouncing words. Also, my beats and sound bytes aren't as well.

These 3 are my recent recordings. I'm trying to be versatile, so if one isn't your liking then switch to the next. Also, don't expect some shyt like Gucci, Waka, 2 Chainz, Lil B, etc:
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I got some others on my SC if you wanna peep, too. Thanks.

 

[Big Mel]

This is hilarious. Not sure if serious. Hilarious either way.

 

[MenacingMonk]

This is hilarious. Not sure if serious. Hilarious either way.

I don't know if I should take you're opinion seriously since you're in the red.

Whatever you're criticism is, explain.

 

[C-Styles]

you def got the voice for it, that's the first thing that caught my attention.

but you def need to get someone that knows how to mix and master, which will make your sound stand out even more. Flow is lil off here and there but with enough work, I see you doing damage, keep it up!

 

[MenacingMonk]

you def got the voice for it, that's the first thing that caught my attention.

but you def need to get someone that knows how to mix and master, which will make your sound stand out even more. Flow is lil off here and there but with enough work, I see you doing damage, keep it up!

Despite the disrespect you get, I appreciate the feedback as a fellow artist.

I know my flow is a little off, but I'm hitting the end of my bars on the snare. Could it be cause I'm structuring my bars in 2? This is how I write:

yada Yada rhyme/ yada yada rhyme

 

[DaveyDave]

if you get some confidence & take command of your voice then you could be better. i think confidence will help with the flow mostly

 

[MenacingMonk]

if you get some confidence & take command of your voice then you could be better. i think confidence will help with the flow mostly

Yea, I read how confidence has a huge deal on flow/delivery, but since I got a shytty mic and no mixer I can't really use my voice to its full potential.

 

[observe]

shyt sux.,.give up your so called rap dreams and do something better for yourself..like pumping gas in a small hick town for natural ice money..or get a god damn job..cuz your rapping is hot trash..

 

[blackslash]

da fck is this

 

[vaudevillevillain]

it's crazy how nikkas will call this nikka wack then go bump lil b

homie u need a better mic & someone to mix your tracks. & more practice if you taking it serious

 

[MenacingMonk]

it's crazy how nikkas will call this nikka wack then go bump lil b

homie u need a better mic & someone to mix your tracks. & more practice if you taking it serious

I'm only really 2 months into it, but haven't been at it every day. I know I gotta cont to practice to better myself.

And all you cats shytting on me, it's cool cause it's not bringing me down.

I should add that my shyt doesn't appeal to cats who like 2 Chainz, Gucci or Lil B.

 

[really tho]

from the heart is dope as fuh

you need some mastering - get yourself a copy of sound forge, normalize your voice with the track - I think your levels just need a little help and back up from the mic

your voice reminds me a lot of tash from the liks (n/h) and he's easy in my top 10 mcs

dope - keep working on it, you have talent - 5 star for effort

 

[MenacingMonk]

from the heart is dope as fuh

you need some mastering - get yourself a copy of sound forge, normalize your voice with the track - I think your levels just need a little help and back up from the mic

your voice reminds me a lot of tash from the liks (n/h) and he's easy in my top 10 mcs

dope - keep working on it, you have talent - 5 star for effort

Thanks, breh.

No need for a n/h

 

[iamstr8fire]

for posting this in sarcasm central.

I don't know if you've thought of this or not but you should look into joining a Toastmasters club. If you join one that isn't all pitty patty fluff fluff it will help you out a lot with pronunciation, confidence, and delivery.

I can't say I was really feeling any of the tracks, but you are early on. I've heard really early music from some of my favorite artists and been .

Keep grinding tho

 

[MenacingMonk]

Upping. Just a few more replies and I'm good.