actually i thought this was really good. the rhymes were clever in a way that was easy to follow at the same time. did you make the beat or get it from somebody else?

actually i thought this was really good. the rhymes were clever in a way that was easy to follow at the same time. did you make the beat or get it from somebody else?
My potna made the beat on this one, thank you for listening broI’m feeling this shyt. Keep pushing doggy
this in a nutshell.As a fan of music, and not an expert, I was gonna say the beat ain't strong enough for your mic presence, although it got better when I put headphones in. shyt is dope I would just say the engineering needs to be better
Butoverall to the concept and execution

this in a nutshell.
Dope shyt ,keep it up G
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Fire.
I appreciate y'all taking the time and listening
Ain't no love in the golden state huh 
Verses was cool. I didn't really care for the hook . You remind of Zion I and blackalicious for some reason.
