Official Music video for C-Styles "Wishing You a happy Birthday" prod by Cole James Cash

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more or less, i have a great job but regardless what would you change to make it better?

Your Flow Sounds So Forced, You Sound Like Some Company Paid Some Minority Actor That Never Rapped A Nice Check So Kids In The "Hood" Can Relate To Their Product
 

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Get a new voice
Get a new delivery
Obtain some type of swag
Stop making all those stupid ass face expressions
Stop cramming so many words in 1 bar
Let it come naturally

Like duke said, you sound FORCED. It's like you know you can't rap for shyt, yet you keep trying. I'll admit you got heart, but it's in the wrong direction. I don't like to shatter dreams but it's hard for me as a possible consumer to want to support your music. Yes, it has some type of substance, but it's not been told in a way that captures the listener's attention. I watched the whole video, you have deadspots in between your rhyming, and that kills any momentum you might have going.





No trolling, keep doing you.
 

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Jokes aside



Get a new voice
Get a new delivery
Obtain some type of swag
Stop making all those stupid ass face expressions
Stop cramming so many words in 1 bar
Let it come naturally

Like duke said, you sound FORCED. It's like you know you can't rap for shyt, yet you keep trying. I'll admit you got heart, but it's in the wrong direction. I don't like to shatter dreams but it's hard for me as a possible consumer to want to support your music. Yes, it has some type of substance, but it's not been told in a way that captures the listener's attention. I watched the whole video, you have deadspots in between your rhyming, and that kills any momentum you might have going.





No trolling, keep doing you.

thanks, and you guys do know i take what you say into consideration? i dont just blow it off like most people would, i use that advice and put it into the next recordings
 
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