poetry 2014 thread

[observe]

I came out the gate with nothing but love no hate/
But no heart beat only my mind would pulsate/
I was feening for the addiction of a friend that would listen/
And when she needed me I couldn't be found cuz I was missing/
These are the visions of fictions of all the Hollywood couples/
...Photos look happy,.,but we're really trouble/
.....For the photos we pause and pose/
.......in home tho it's holes in Walls/
I ain't even talking about fukking a hoe that's involved/
I'm talking about a girl that holds me down when it's no job/
But..................,ya can't find love/
When it was never a crush and you never did lust/
You just did it for the rush cuz you never did nothing /
And you can't find something if you never did much/
So I put all my trust in myself and no one else/
If i die a slow death im not looking for some help

 

[LurkerLost1]

Sheep we are... following a wayward shepherd, and once that wool is pulled over our eyes, the wolves in the midst feed us more lies, wolf! Is what society cried, but too late the flock is grazing on borrowed time, because while we being led blind, the wolf donned a different disguise, and became the savior we thought faith would provide. U see this situation could be applied, to how our information is supplied, blindly following radiowaves from the sky, hoping they explain lifes how's and why's, it all boils down to our own morality and that's the cut and dry, societies actions constantly encouraged by, a child pregnant that can't get a license to drive, or could it be tv letting ignorance remain so heavily glorified, networks profiting from the formula now every station seems obliged, to allow future generations to believe its ok for a man to make a woman cry, instead of embracing our queens for the beauty that resides inside, I'm not going to lie, you see I've been desensitized, and we've all been brilliantly hypnotized to follow instead of lead in our lives, but we have to change the hand in which our morality lies, and survive by relying on what He provides...

 

[SemiEnlightenedBum]

a postaette on here wrote a poem about moi,it twas quite touching,if only she didn't have a man..

 

[IronFist]

I came out the gate with nothing but love no hate/
But no heart beat only my mind would pulsate/
I was feening for the addiction of a friend that would listen/
And when she needed me I couldn't be found cuz I was missing/
These are the visions of fictions of all the Hollywood couples/
...Photos look happy,.,but we're really trouble/
.....For the photos we pause and pose/
.......in home tho it's holes in Walls/
I ain't even talking about fukking a hoe that's involved/
I'm talking about a girl that holds me down when it's no job/
But..................,ya can't find love/
When it was never a crush and you never did lust/
You just did it for the rush cuz you never did nothing /
And you can't find something if you never did much/
So I put all my trust in myself and no one else/
If i die a slow death im not looking for some help

im feeling this you recording it?

 

[observe]

im feeling this you recording it?

Naw..I wrote it to the beat a few weeks ago that I made 2 songs to a year ago..I made 2 different songs to the same beat and I didnt like em so I gave em to my boys on ughh and they made a song out of it, so i decided to write this verse to collab with them..but then my producer put my original song as a bonus track on my album..

But I just write to beats all the time and never rec em

 

[IronFist]

Naw..I wrote it to the beat a few weeks ago that I made 2 songs to a year ago..I made 2 different songs to the same beat and I didnt like em so I gave em to my boys on ughh and they made a song out of it, so i decided to write this verse to collab with them..but then my producer put my original song as a bonus track on my album..

But I just write to beats all the time and never rec em

props homie

 

[Recca Gatsby]

@Desirous



Through your inquisitive eyes you speak as loud to shout

From the moon I saw the sleep within your eyes, to the flare of the sun

Before the silk of the sheets I remove to get dressed, I am instrumental to the knowledge of you

We share eyesight for an eternity, yet only a second passes

You tell me so much

While I work, you work in your reflection to mail it perfect

Arriving back home you look at me

Your heels stand taller than a mountain

You stand the most succulent, with no inhibitions

I am food to you

Akin to a lion appreciating the prey of its indignation

No sooner can you greet does she pounce

I am starving all of a sudden

Your scent blesses my nostrils with utter sweetness

As you ruffle at me, my instincts of desire burst out the seams of my being

Bare we rub so excited, I feel twelve again

We kiss deeper than a comet could a crater

Your shrills thrill, you whisper to me to become one

My God how I could not expect, obviously we needed this

You got me

I want nothing more than your pleasure

I take your index finger in hand and slowly suck to it, then cup your palm

Closer I bring you to me, look you in your eyes, you are fierce

“Stay with me”, you say

The breeze of the room becomes nonexistent

Closer I bring you to me, and your ear hears as I grasp your lobe and take the delicate approach

You feel all of me as I become the muffs for your ears

Your quaint expressions of pleasure only invigorate me

Nothing more

I bring you closer to me as I stand

Down me you trickle

Your whimpers cry loud to me in pleasure, your grip on me all the more tighter

“Don’t stop”, you plead to me

Auditory, I take that way past the point of normalcy

Your every desire, I know I will become fact

 

[IronFist]

dont know why i didnt get an alert to this.

dopeness though bruh

 

[Crakface]

Alot of my raps are poetic,,,I just don't record them..


The color of nite


Soon as the sun sets thats when my lungs stretch/
Breathing in to the nite till she's undressed/
She's a villain she speaks about gun threats/
Pulling licks downtown kinda like tongue sex/
She painted me a rainbow on our nite walks/
Blue and red lights, yellow tape, and white chalk/
I'm soothed by her kiss when I move thru the mist/
She throws her shadow on me like the moon was eclipsed/
I'm standing on a cliff looking down at a city/
It's a valley of death where stars don't shine really/
I sit back as I peer thru the black/
Navigating thru the nite sky the stars are my map/
And when I point in the air, then I summon it/
Anointed to the heir now here comes the mother ship/
Sweet chariot take me away/
Chasing the sun till we break day......at nite we play/

Your rhyme patterns fell apart half way through.

 

[SemiEnlightenedBum]

burrowing for heroin like William Burroughs(pause)

..razors in hollow weenie candy,cyanide in your tot's churro's//

harrowing white horse..big bearded like Norse/>/

no legs left,still run the course


Coli postas got no game..jesters on thee court

mascots......in FEMA camps with mass cots

hot to trot,green like Thoth,black goth,so much coke up nose it bloodclots

devouring your Baby named Ruth like i was Sloth...'


new strandeth of tree,call it Goonie Goo Goo

in Chinatown Chinatown searching for opium dens with Suzy Woo Woo

at your bullshyt sneeze,hachoo,chew through flesh like cashew

no more Cash Rules,tis Rothschild rule,
no more chips,'less tis RFID../
Run,less get fukked by Idiocracy Dogs
(get)Guns,jus run amok on these Demo(n)crazy frauds***

*teleports*

 

[IronFist]

bump

 

[Taadow]

Some say I have no identity.
I've been disconnected from divinity.
But I ain't lost in my spot, because I can tell you what i'm not.

I ain't pretty, but neither is life!
and both of us can't still get right...

I ain't about violence - but listen, son:
I ain't the one.
I ain't a gangsta, but I ain't no punk.
You can call that what you want...

I ain't so behind I gotta do crime...
but if you gotta, I ain't gotta change your mind.
I ain't against White folk, or black ones
as long as y'all don't get in my way when I stack ones.
I ain't gotta have money to make me rich.
I make money - the money don't make me, bytch.

I ain't believin' in Christmas, boo. But,
I ain't athiest - I see God in you.

I ain't gonna say what's on my mind to you,
if I can't tell what's on your mind to do.
I ain't afraid to be wrong,
as much as i'm afraid of being that, and not moving on.


I am...finished.

 

[IronFist]

dont know why im not getting alerts need to find that rhyme thread got something for it.

 

[Giselle]

 

[IronFist]

thinking about writing something to that jhene aiko instrumental