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The old man seldom gave advice but when he did he said,
"Life seems very burdensome until you wake up dead,
Men lose themselves to drink and drugs and some of them to wealth
If you lose yourself in anything make sure it's someone else"

I lived my life, forgot the words, and drank to my content
On ales and beers and barley wine were all my fortunes spent
No joy was found in bottled brews, from them I did depart
Indeed to seek a better vice to cure my broken heart

I dabbled with some opium, I did a little cane,
I poked myself with needles so they'd take away the pain,
No joy was found in any drugs, from them I did depart
Indeed to seek a better vice to cure my broken heart

I rose in age, ambition too, now fortune I did seek,
I thought strength was shown with treasures bought and poverty was weak,
Though my fortunes rose and treasures too, from them I did depart,
Indeed to seek a better vice to cure my broken heart

And search and search I did indeed, was never satisfied,
Left to right and high to low everything was tried,
Until I got so old and frail, the searching had to end,
So I rid myself of vices all and settled for a friend,

A younger lad, not twenty yet, with such a life ahead,
Though peers and many girls his age he talked with me instead,
Of dreams of drink, of drugs, of wealth and what the world would bring,
He wanted this he wanted that he wanted everything,

I seldom gave the lad advice but when I did I said,
"Life seems very burdensome until you wake up dead,
Men lose themselves to drug and drink and some of them to wealth,
If you lose yourself in anything make sure it's someone else."
 
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yeah i might have to drop some stuff soon g.

Alone

When I was younger I always felt alone I had siblings but they were never home

So I had imaginary friends we would play and even talk on the phone

I guess you can say I was a weird kid but I just wanted the feeling of being someone's very own

If that makes sense..tried to make friends but those would turn into physical threats

I was never the coolest I mean far from the losses I mean I haven't chalked up much victories but I am not a loser!

Maybe I'm just confused or maybe I've been destroyed people didn't come up to me first they would always avoid

All I ever wanted is what your typical person has and honestly I don't have that

All I have is paranoia a massive headache and a stretch of depression long enough to smack Mr fantastic

And I come from a family that doesn't talk so every thing is kept locked inside a box

Are those tv families even real? Let me spin the wheel of fortune and be fortuned enough to have that

I always feel undeserving I'm always immersing myself with these Poems and all I hope is that its a little bit of love out there that's up for reserving

That's all I can ever wish for but I think I've used up all my wishes and all I could wish for is to wish for more
 

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just fooling around w/ Chess References

The Black "King" From "Queens" was right when he said "Life is Like A Chess Game"
In Everyday Life seems like its full of "sacrifice" once you "notate" the numbers.
Cause if you not center any "exploited mistake" could end in a "fork" "skewer" or "blunder"
 
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My God is more than my savior.
More than a rock to cling to among the most turbulent storms
More than a provocational figure who subsequently incites quarrels & wars.
More than human comprehension and maniacal manipulation for systematic control.
More Than a felonious novel and artistic depictions there of.
More than you.......More Than Them.......More Than Me.
For That my God and those reasons alone, I suffer, cry, bleed, and question no more.
I only want and need you more.​
 
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