post a rhyme scheme better then this

[pointproven214]

Mic check y'all
Then throw it to the floor
The crowd wanted more so I came in the door
The great Rakim, papermates to the pen
Knowledge is born and the light strikes again
Elements burst and gave birth to the first
Get the pen from the nurse and hook the mic up first
When it absolutely positively has to be there on time
I deliver a rhyme
The heckler of hip hop, hop to this one
I got more kid, they hate to miss one
Style got jazz and the crowd's out of control
Cause I've got the mic and I've got the soul
New York's own microphone technician
Thoughts'll give 'em visions
Style'll make you listen
Devastates the ear, my opponents can't see me
I gave 'em directions, but wrote it in graffiti
But they wanna know my m.o. ease back though
They want the exact flow, then study my steelo
Sketch the skit, but they still can't see what I did
I heat the mic up kid

 

[Farrinto]

Hey diddle diddle,
The cat and the fiddle,
The cow jumped over the moon.
The little dog laughed,
To see such fun,
And the dish ran away with the spoon

flawless rhyming imo

 

[MidnightMercenary]

This one got some good rhyme schemes imo personally:

11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

 

[Deltron]

I am Sam
I am Sam
Sam I amThat Sam-I-am!
Than Sam-I-am!
I do not like
that Sam-I-am!Do you like
green eggs and ham?I do not like them,
Sam-I-am.
I do not like
green eggs and ham.

Would you like them
here or there?

I would not like them
here or there.
I would not like them
anywhere.
I do not like
green eggs and ham.
I do not like them,
Sam-I-am.

Would you like them
in a house?
Would you like them
with a mouse?

I do not like them
in a house.
I do not like them
with a mouse.
I do not like them
here or there.
I do not like them
anywhere.
I do not like green eggs and ham.
I do not like them, Sam-I-am.

Would you eat them
in a box?
Would you eat them
with a fox?

Not in a box.
Not with a fox.
Not in a house.
Not with a mouse.
I would not eat them here or there.
I would not eat them anywhere.
I would not eat green eggs and ham.
I do not like them, Sam-I-am.

Would you? Could you?
In a car?
Eat them! Eat them!
Here they are.

I would not,
could not,
in a car.

You may like them.
You will see.
You may like them
in a tree!

I would not, could not in a tree.
Not in a car! You let me be.

I do not like them in a box.
I do not like them with a fox.
I do not like them in a house.
I do not like them with a mouse.
I do not like them here or there.
I do not like them anywhere.
I do not like green eggs and ham.
I do not like them, Sam-I-am.

A train! A train!
A train! A train!
Could you, would you,
on a train?

Not on a train! Not in a tree!
Not in a car! Sam! Let me be!

I would not, could not, in a box.
I could not, would not, with a fox.
I will not eat them with a mouse.
I will not eat them in a house.
I will not eat them here or there.
I will not eat them anywhere.
I do not eat green eggs and ham.
I do not like them, Sam-I-am.

Say!
In the dark?
Here in the dark!
Would you, could you, in the dark?

I would not, could not,
in the dark.

Would you, could you, in the rain?I would not, could not,
in the rain.
Not in the dark. Not on a train.
Not in a car. Not in a tree.
I do not like them, Sam, you see.
Not in a house. Not in a box.
Not with a mouse. Not with a fox.
I will not eat them here or there.
I do not like them anywhere!You do not like
green eggs and ham?I do not
like them,
Sam-I-am.Could you, would you,
with a goat?

I would not,
could not,
with a goat!

Would you, could you,
on a boat?

I could not, would not, on a boat.
I will not, will not, with a goat.
I will not eat them in the rain.
I will not eat them on a train.
Not in the dark! Not in a tree!
Not in a car! You let me be!
I do not like them in a box.
I do not like them with a fox.
I will not eat them in a house.
I do not like them with a mouse.
I do not like them here or there.
I do not like them ANYWHERE!

I do not like
green eggs
and ham!I do not like them,
Sam-I-am.You do not like them.
So you say.
Try them! Try them!
And you may.
Try them and you may, I say.Sam!
If you will let me be,
I will try them.
You will see.Say!
I like green eggs and ham!
I do! I like them, Sam-I-am!
And I would eat them in a boat.
And I would eat them with a goat…

And I will eat them in the rain.
And in the dark. And on a train.
And in a car. And in a tree.
They are so good, so good, you see!

So I will eat them in a box.
And I will eat them with a fox.
And I will eat them in a house.
And I will eat them with a mouse.
And I will eat them here and there.
Say! I will eat them ANYWHERE!

I do so like
green eggs and ham!
Thank you!
Thank you,
Sam-I-am!

 

[Farrinto]

So I will eat them in a box.
And I will eat them with a fox.
And I will eat them in a house.
And I will eat them with a mouse.
And I will eat them here and there.
Say! I will eat them ANYWHERE!

Those multis

 

[mortuus est]

project pat dont give a fuk
project pat dont give a fuk
project pat dont give a fuk
project pat dont give a fuk

 

[Mowgli]

 

[Juggalo Fred]

anything by Violent J

 

[Juggalo Fred]

anything by Violent J

or shaggy

 

[Lost His Smile]

 

[phatphuck]

this is better:

Mic check y'all
Then throw it to the floor
The crowd wanted more so I came in the door
The great Rakim, papermates to the pen
Knowledge is born and the light strikes again
Elements burst and gave birth to the first
Get the pen from the nurse and hook the mic up first
When it absolutely positively has to be there on time
I deliver a rhyme
The heckler of hip hop, hop to this one
I got more kid, they hate to miss one
Style got jazz and the crowd's out of control
Cause I've got the mic and I've got the soul
New York's own microphone technician
Thoughts'll give 'em visions
Style'll make you listen
Devastates the ear, my opponents can't see me
I gave 'em directions, but wrote it in graffiti
But they wanna know my m.o. ease back though
They want the exact flow, then study my steelo
Sketch the skit, but they still can't see what I did
I heat the mic up kid

 

[B-Mint94]

Done

 

[Prince Cairo]

You really are a piece of work.

Keep doing what you do, breh.

Real talk, I can't imagine The Booth without your rhyme scheme threads weekly. Granted, I don't know what the fukk about them you find so interesting, but more power to you.

 

[Juggalo Fred]

You really are a piece of work.

Keep doing what you do, breh.

Real talk, I can't imagine The Booth without your rhyme scheme threads weekly. Granted, I don't know what the fukk about them you find so interesting, but more power to you.

it's a damn shame the OP will never recognize NECRO for being a much better multi spitter than his idol Feminem

 

[pointproven214]

Done

no.............