onelastdeath
Banned
Yall know how I get down already 
this is a long read. There's a "Too Long Didn't Read" at the bottom for people who don't want to read the whole story. If you have the attention span to read this, or are bored and in need of something to read, then continue. If not 
, no need to complain about it being long, I know.
So last night, I went out to hang out with my boys in Brooklyn because my shift got cancelled at work. I got there around 10:30 or so and It was pretty much the first time I drove my new whip. So I was straight
riding through the city feeling myself. Even though I was bummed out with some sweats and a T Shirt 
I get there and we're Just catching up, running some Gears Of War 3 and smoking. I needed this too, because I broke it off with my girl
Well for now anyway
One my boys, Dre (not his real name) said he had a date and that he was going to be late.
Which was alright because it's been a minute since I had an A+B with my homie Marlon(also not his real name). I would have preferred it if we could have all just chilled the whole night, but I understand.
Plus, he said he'd been working on it for a month or two and he figured this would be the night he'd hit, so
So me and Marlon Choppin it up. Talked about how he got his new crib and new job, and how life was really starting to come together for him. And that was good to hear because if anyone deserves it, it's him. Dude works for everything he gets. He kept getting on me about leaving Brooklyn for Manhattan. Talking about i left BK solely to pursue white bytches
We Talked about my breakup and he told me not to worry about it because Dre had a date tonight, and "if that nikka can get a date, then I should never complain" and on a more serious note, I could focus more on my immediate future and goals.
So, I don't know if we lost track of time, but I when I went to the bathroom to unload my Burrito Demons, I took out my phone to check thecoli, and I see 8 missed calls from Dre. So after I finish using the bathroom I come out and told Mar, like "Check your Phone, see if this nikka called you cause I got mad missed calls.
He checks it, and sure enough, he missed some calls and said
"something probably happened, I told that nikka she had crazy eyes. That nikka prolly dead, or locked up in a dungeon somewhere. Nobody listens to me."
I look at him like
, because something could have actually happened, plus I called his phone and it went straight to voicemail. 
So about 20 minutes later, we hear the door knock, and I go to get it, and it's Dre, he's visibly frustrated, and sweating a bit. I look at him like
. And said "Damn bro the p*ssy was that good. 
"
He shakes his head, gives me dap and comes in the crib. He sits on the couch with his head down, and Marlon goes
"son what happened?"
Dre: yo is there more bud
can we smoke now
So we sitting at the kitchen table, I throw the bag to Marlon and said "roll up hoe
to which he said "okay papi 
" in that generic gay nikka voice that everyone makes when they're pretending to be gay.
I looked at Dre And told him to start from the beginning.
He says
"Yall know I been fukking with Madison for a minute now. And I'm feeling her a lot. I took her to eat Downtown, and we were having a great night. We had dinner, had ice cream. Flirted a lot, laughing a lot, and she told me how much she was feeling me too"
I'm like "good good, that's wassup, I'm not seeing the problem "
So he continues, "I was having a good night we were ----" then this nikka Marlon cuts him off "Bro, We don't need to hear about a rom com, tell us what happened so we can help you"
Dre: iGht iGht, so we got on the train and we couldn't keep our hands off of eachother, we're kissing in public and shyt. I told her I wanted to walk her home, and she said it was sweet. It was Partially because I wanted to make sure she got in safe, partially because I wanted to fukk. We get to her block, and Infront of her crib. I lean in to give her a kiss goodnight, and she gives it to me, but we start kissing a lot and I'm grabbing her ass and shyt"
Me: okay?
Dre: she breaks away from me and starts tearing. So I look at her trying to figure out what's wrong, and I told her she could tell me if something was bothering her. So she looks at me and says "I don't want you to look at me differently, I really like you and this is hard for me to talk about, but I don't want to lead you on or hurt you" I reassured her that everything was alright, and that she could tell me anything. So she looks at me crying mad hard, so I looked her in her eyes and told her that she could tell me what was wrong. She looks straight into my eyes, and tells me
Me and Mar:
Me : damn dawg you ain't hit did you?
Marlon: damn son that's why you called like that, you fukked huh? Well you might not have it cause there was this one time when I ----
Dre cut him off and I hit him with the
Dre: 
nah man, nah.
Me: my nikka what did you do?
Dre: nah bro I didn't hit. 
Marlon: boy, what happened?
Dre :
Me and Mar:
Me: you what?
Dre:
Marlon: Why would you do that
Dre:
Me:
so you run? Did you at least say goodnight or that you had to go? Or that it was okay or something?
Dre:
Marlon: that's the most fukkED thing I've ever heard.
Dre:
I know. I feel like shyt. I can't stop thinking about her Now I don't know what to do.
That shyt was on my mind for the whole night, just the visual alone. nikkas spent the rest of the night talking about it. I told him that he should hit her up and try to at least apologize. My boy Mar said that there's no coming back from that and she should just move on and never talk to her again. Because her feelings are probably to hurt to ever see him again. Reminder, he's 19. So maybe it was a mistake of his youth, but I was 19 two years ago, and I could never imagine myself doing something so
this is a long read. There's a "Too Long Didn't Read" at the bottom for people who don't want to read the whole story. If you have the attention span to read this, or are bored and in need of something to read, then continue. If not , no need to complain about it being long, I know.So last night, I went out to hang out with my boys in Brooklyn because my shift got cancelled at work. I got there around 10:30 or so and It was pretty much the first time I drove my new whip. So I was straight
riding through the city feeling myself. Even though I was bummed out with some sweats and a T Shirt I get there and we're Just catching up, running some Gears Of War 3 and smoking. I needed this too, because I broke it off with my girl
Well for now anywayOne my boys, Dre (not his real name) said he had a date and that he was going to be late.
Which was alright because it's been a minute since I had an A+B with my homie Marlon(also not his real name). I would have preferred it if we could have all just chilled the whole night,
but I understand.Plus, he said he'd been working on it for a month or two and he figured this would be the night he'd hit, so
So me and Marlon Choppin it up. Talked about how he got his new crib and new job, and how life was really starting to come together for him. And that was good to hear because if anyone deserves it, it's him. Dude works for everything he gets. He kept getting on me about leaving Brooklyn for Manhattan. Talking about i left BK solely to pursue white bytches
We Talked about my breakup and he told me not to worry about it because Dre had a date tonight, and "if that nikka can get a date, then I should never complain"
and on a more serious note, I could focus more on my immediate future and goals.So, I don't know if we lost track of time, but I when I went to the bathroom to unload my Burrito Demons, I took out my phone to check thecoli, and I see 8 missed calls from Dre. So after I finish using the bathroom I come out and told Mar, like "Check your Phone, see if this nikka called you cause I got mad missed calls.
He checks it, and sure enough, he missed some calls and said
"something probably happened, I told that nikka she had crazy eyes. That nikka prolly dead, or locked up in a dungeon somewhere. Nobody listens to me."
I look at him like
, because something could have actually happened, plus I called his phone and it went straight to voicemail. So about 20 minutes later, we hear the door knock, and I go to get it, and it's Dre, he's visibly frustrated, and sweating a bit. I look at him like
. And said "Damn bro the p*ssy was that good. "He shakes his head, gives me dap and comes in the crib. He sits on the couch with his head down, and Marlon goes
"son what happened?
"Dre: yo is there more bud
can we smoke now So we sitting at the kitchen table, I throw the bag to Marlon and said "roll up hoe
to which he said "okay papi " in that generic gay nikka voice that everyone makes when they're pretending to be gay.I looked at Dre And told him to start from the beginning.
He says
"Yall know I been fukking with Madison for a minute now. And I'm feeling her a lot. I took her to eat Downtown, and we were having a great night
. We had dinner, had ice cream. Flirted a lot, laughing a lot, and she told me how much she was feeling me too"I'm like "good good, that's wassup, I'm not seeing the problem "
So he continues, "I was having a good night we were ----" then this nikka Marlon cuts him off "Bro, We don't need to hear about a rom com, tell us what happened so we can help you
"Dre: iGht iGht, so we got on the train and we couldn't keep our hands off of eachother, we're kissing in public and shyt. I told her I wanted to walk her home, and she said it was sweet. It was Partially because I wanted to make sure she got in safe, partially because I wanted to fukk. We get to her block, and Infront of her crib. I lean in to give her a kiss goodnight, and she gives it to me, but we start kissing a lot and I'm grabbing her ass and shyt"
Me: okay?
Dre: she breaks away from me and starts tearing. So I look at her trying to figure out what's wrong, and I told her she could tell me if something was bothering her. So she looks at me and says "I don't want you to look at me differently, I really like you and this is hard for me to talk about, but I don't want to lead you on or hurt you" I reassured her that everything was alright, and that she could tell me anything. So she looks at me crying mad hard, so I looked her in her eyes and told her that she could tell me what was wrong. She looks straight into my eyes, and tells me
that's she's HIV+, and got it from her last boyfriend.
Me and Mar:
Me : damn dawg you ain't hit did you?
Marlon: damn son that's why you called like that, you fukked huh? Well you might not have it cause there was this one time when I ----
Dre cut him off and I hit him with the
Dre:
nah man, nah.Me: my nikka what did you do?
Dre: nah bro I didn't hit.
Marlon: boy, what happened?
Dre :
yo I ran down the steps then ran away.
Me and Mar:
Me: you what?
Dre:
I ran away bro. I ran right down the block at full speed and didn't look back
Marlon: Why would you do that
you just left her there, after she opened up to you?
Dre:
Yo I don't know. She such a good person and so beautiful. I think I felt like if I would stayed, I would have consoled her and ended up hitting I Literally couldn't think of anything else to do. I knew I wouldn't be able to control myself if I went inside and saw her undressed . I woulda used a Condom but I can't risk that
I Literally couldn't think of anything else to do. I knew I wouldn't be able to control myself if I went inside and saw her undressed . I woulda used a Condom but I can't risk that Me:
so you run? Did you at least say goodnight or that you had to go? Or that it was okay or something?Dre:
nah I just left,I kept running and I realized I dropped my wallet, so I called you to ask you to pick me up. I had to walk here from Downtown
I just left,I kept running and I realized I dropped my wallet, so I called you to ask you to pick me up. I had to walk here from Downtown Marlon: that's the most fukkED thing I've ever heard.
Dre:
I know. I feel like shyt. I can't stop thinking about her Now I don't know what to do. That shyt was on my mind for the whole night, just the visual alone. nikkas spent the rest of the night talking about it. I told him that he should hit her up and try to at least apologize. My boy Mar said that there's no coming back from that and she should just move on and never talk to her again. Because her feelings are probably to hurt to ever see him again. Reminder, he's 19. So maybe it was a mistake of his youth, but I was 19 two years ago, and I could never imagine myself doing something so
my boy had a date, found out she was HIV + girl and after she opened her heart up to him and told him, he went Barry Allen on her and speed forced down the block, leaving her crying and emotional because he didn't want to risk having sex with her, because he can't control his dikk.
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