Singles Some NEW winter music for July ---> "The Type" NoDotWon x The Vampire Dynasty

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very dope song- i think i agree with chicago, the lyrics in the verses are good but just slightly slow the pace up on the verses. the hook is paced perfectly. overall i like the song though. just a few too many words in a bar can make your flow feel rushed and you not breathing properly through it. but i like your syllables and schemes within it.

i will definitely check for the full project if this is a piece of it.
 

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Ran it back a few times

He did it again :wow:

This hook is money, think it might be my fav hook from you :ohhh:

Love how you switched it up on the second chorus, introducing the nepotism brother scheme. :wow:



@ShaDynasty killed this beat too. Reminds me of some classic Havoc drums

Need more of this shyt !:blessed:
 

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Just updated the YouTube link:



Ran it back a few times

He did it again :wow:

This hook is money, think it might be my fav hook from you :ohhh:

Love how you switched it up on the second chorus, introducing the nepotism brother scheme. :wow:



@ShaDynasty killed this beat too. Reminds me of some classic Havoc drums

Need more of this shyt !:blessed:

:ohlawd:
 

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very dope song- i think i agree with chicago, the lyrics in the verses are good but just slightly slow the pace up on the verses. the hook is paced perfectly. overall i like the song though. just a few too many words in a bar can make your flow feel rushed and you not breathing properly through it. but i like your syllables and schemes within it.

i will definitely check for the full project if this is a piece of it.

Yessir this is off my next album coming later this year, appreciate the feedback and that you fw it :salute:
 

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Ran it back a few times

He did it again :wow:

This hook is money, think it might be my fav hook from you :ohhh:

Love how you switched it up on the second chorus, introducing the nepotism brother scheme. :wow:



@ShaDynasty killed this beat too. Reminds me of some classic Havoc drums

Need more of this shyt !:blessed:

Appreciate that, I'm getting into some 90s influenced beats atm.

Just updated the YouTube link:





:ohlawd:

New version?
 

FruitOfTheVale

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Appreciate that, I'm getting into some 90s influenced beats atm.


New version?

Yup enough stuff was worth tweaking (mainly the low end and some balancing on the verses) that I decided to replace it, this one definitely got more "oomph" imo so I'm done with the tweaks lol.
 
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