That beat switch 
Singles Some NEW winter music for July ---> "The Type" NoDotWon x The Vampire Dynasty
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FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
You know I'm serious about those 18 hours breh. But yeah this shyt slams something terrible
. The sample sounds like a mix between Nuttin but a G Thang and Soul Food. Reminds me of some Dungeon Family shyt
That beat switch
Yeah I'll say twice that beat switch
Kreh said Dungeon Family
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
If I tagged you it's because I know you'll keep it 
if this 
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, lmk
if this or , lmk
If I tagged you it's because I know you'll keep it
Fire song. Why yall hiding yall faces though? Put your face on your art!
Bryan Danielson
Jmare007 x Bryan Danielson x JLova = King Ghidorah
If I tagged you it's because I know you'll keep it
This sound like some underground 2004-2014 stuff.
And that’s not a diss as I love that 2004-2014
MF Doom, Aesop Rock , Master Ace, Jean Grae, Cage type jawn.
I fux with this
So I give it a Dope
Grand_Verbalizer
All Star
If I tagged you it's because I know you'll keep it
Thanks for the tag, Last time you did I didn't say anything because I wasn't sure my criticism would be constructive but in general the booth could be useful for trying diff. versions
Previous track it felt like you crowded the beat (which was a dope one) and could of used some spacing plus you overdid the vocal inflictions
This track sounds more like you wrote to the beat, Flow is better and the vocal inflictions seem less random although I'd still tone it down (personal preference) delivery is improved, hook is good and lyrics sound more focused and direct than what I've heard from you before.
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
Fire song. Why yall hiding yall faces though? Put your face on your art!
I laughed irl because I legit don't know what @ShaDynasty look like, all I know is his beat game crazyThis sound like some underground 2004-2014 stuff.
And that’s not a diss as I love that 2004-2014
MF Doom, Aesop Rock , Master Ace, Jean Grae, Cage type jawn.
I fux with this
So I give it a Dope
Hell yeah when I first got on the internet that was what was floating around, especially DOOM, Ace, LB and Jean Grae. Will always love that era
I appreciate the feedback for both tracks, I always like hearing what different folks think works and doesn't work.
IS THAT YOU ON THE HOOK
OR IS THAT A SAMPLE?
THE FLOW AND DELIVERY
ARE LIGHT YEARS BETTER
ON THE HOOK THAN THE VERSES.
Interesting feedback. Yeah that's me on the hook, the way I'm hearing your comment is that the verses sound too dark compared to the hook. I'll definitely try a version where the verses have a little more sparkle than they currently do and see if it works, thanks for listening
Hell yeah when I first got on the internet that was what was floating around, especially DOOM, Ace, LB and Jean Grae. Will always love that era
Interesting feedback. Yeah that's me on the hook, the way I'm hearing your comment is that the verses sound too dark compared to the hook. I'll definitely try a version where the verses have a little more sparkle than they currently do and see if it works, thanks for listening
THE HOOK IS FIRE.
FLOW & DELIVERY ARE VERY
SHARP & CRISP.
THE VERSES SOUND KINDA
SLOPPY & JUMBLED.
THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE 2
IS CRAZY TO ME.
BUILD ON WHAT YOU DID
WITH THE HOOK GOING FORWARD.
PRETTY MUCH USE THAT
AS THE TEMPLATE/BLUEPRINT
OF WHAT YOU SHOULD SOUND LIKE
ON ALL OF YOUR JOINTS.
NormanConnors
Detroit/MSU Spartan Life
The Dungeon Family analysis was spot on
shyt is fire, sounds like you added some new tools to your bag breh. Production is outstanding and I'm really liking the delivery on this. Appreciate the wisdom in the lyrics too.
I thought that was @CHICAGO on the hook for a min, yall have some similarities with some of the vocal inflections/stretching of syllables (and no that's not a diss
)
shyt is fire, sounds like you added some new tools to your bag breh. Production is outstanding and I'm really liking the delivery on this. Appreciate the wisdom in the lyrics too.
I thought that was @CHICAGO on the hook for a min, yall have some similarities with some of the vocal inflections/stretching of syllables (and no that's not a diss
)
NormanConnors
Detroit/MSU Spartan Life
Bugzbunny129
All Star
Good work you and sha. Def dope. Beat and rhymes. Flow/hook def catches ya right away.
SnowflakesByTheOZ
Sorry, that's another B
subbed !!!!!! Def gotta check this out later when I get home can’t wait. Need that NoDotWon album !
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
The Dungeon Family analysis was spot on
shyt is fire, sounds like you added some new tools to your bag breh. Production is outstanding and I'm really liking the delivery on this. Appreciate the wisdom in the lyrics too.
I thought that was @CHICAGO on the hook for a min, yall have some similarities with some of the vocal inflections/stretching of syllables (and no that's not a diss
Appreciate that you see the growth, much more to comeThem 1995 style drums breh
Hook, verses, content all hit for me. This is a lane that would work for a full project for sure
Ain’t gon lie the content covers some different ground but the theme across the project is consistent, appreciate you listening!
Fasho!I got you in a couple short months