Stop Drug Overdoses Rap

[Tjbenz]

Let me know what you guys think. Thanks

 

[Tjbenz]

any feedback? Thanks

 

[Tom Foolery]

It's ok.
To many syllables. Try to get our point across with less words.

Listen to lil' wayne singles up to carter3 and study how he simplifies his shyt over the years.

 

[Tjbenz]

It's ok.
To many syllables. Try to get our point across with less words.

Listen to lil' wayne singles up to carter3 and study how he simplifies his shyt over the years.

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Tjbenz]

Any other have feedback?