take a look at my rap battle and let me know what you think

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Millz

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Lol nikkaz hypin up dem basic ass rhymes from that dot y nikka, your round was kool but a lotta filler. But yo wtf is up with ya du-rag this aint 2004 my nikka.

anyway you clearly took it gl
 

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Your rappin is decent to good, not sure how you would do with a larger crowd and more interuptions tho.

You need to work on/put some personality into your performance, other wise you just come across as any other up and coming battle rapper.

Dont use generic wordplay like Jewels/Adolf/8 off, its played as fukk.

Dont use to beat me you gunna need.... thats played to fukk also




:pachaha: The other breh sounded like Johnie Alcatraz
 

T.H.E.GOD

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he about that life, make sure he get snuff? :steviej:

you got the power in your finger, ET? :obama:

he so trash, his mother should have been brenda? :wow:

you know u better than lux? :wtb:


Good shyt all in all.. I was entertained and wouldn't mind peeping some future battles. you got that little gangsta aggressive flow that i look for in battles.. keep working on it and don't stop ur grind. Real talk.
 

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JRipp got deaded by grown men bars

"when jesus walks" man shut the fukk up!

ole light bright ass nicca, Deron Williams with the neck rolls nicca:dwillhuh:
 

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Yall nikkaz aint gone say shyt bout that doorag???


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FUTUREVISIONS

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Yall nikkaz aint gone say shyt bout that doorag???


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well against better comp.. he might have gotten a mean free/rebuttal based on the doo-rag with the tail out...

don't rock that ish again homie fredo :heh:
 
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