technically pac had better bar structure then rakim

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Out on bail fresh outta jail, California dreamin
Soon as I stepped on the scene, I'm hearin hoochies screamin
Fiendin for money and alcohol
The life of a west side playa where cowards die and it's all ball
Only in Cali where we riot not rally to live and die
In L.A. we wearin Chucks not Ballies (that's right)
Dressed in Locs and khaki suits and ride is what we do
Flossin but have caution we collide with other crews
Famous cause we program worldwide
Let'em recognize from Long Beach to Rosecrans
Bumpin and grindin like a slow jam, it's west side
So you know the row won't bow down to no man
Say what you say
But give me that bomb beat from Dre
Let me serenade the streets of L.A.
From Oakland to Sacktown
The Bay Area and back down
Cali is where they put they mack down
Give me love!

in terms of music theory and fitting the lyrics to a instrumental synocpation rests and rhyming on beatt rhythm cadence etc pac was doper.
 
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http://www.thecoli.com/threads/official-grassroots-campaign-to-ban-the-rhyme-king.23176/

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[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl
 
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the cac mamba said:
http://www.thecoli.com/threads/official-grassroots-campaign-to-ban-the-rhyme-king.23176/

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[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl
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Technically speaking, Pac rhymed enemies and hennessy waaaay too much.
 
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