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One blow of her kiss can quell a lit candle
Ironic that same kiss ignites flames swift
Warming my heart under mantle
With lunar eyes full, fed off your energy under moonlight
Our surroundings become peak to your dimensions
This world exists but a frame merely to capture your perfections
Her presence, a present, no matter tense--past, present, or future
A wink from her is a cold flurry of morphine to medula
Instant serenity
Lips, both, compressed with passion I help them dampen
We embrace, friction of our static electrifies
Sparks to match, we let off like a loaded automatic
Instant serenity
Whirlwind of your aura creates blankets of floating lotus
Soon to be embedded in this bed, revene dreams sure to follow
Essense of you sure to quench, sultry Spanish echoe of walls so hollow
Give me all of you, recover, we begin again tomorrow
Everlasting serenity
 

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Koalabama and the Cosmos

Different Lifetimes

I stand tall at the top
Waiting for the drop
She approaches me with the same lingo
Our typical ring techniques and movement
Sort of like a dance partner but with the wordplay
conversation is extraordinary
To the point it's very scary
I'm falling in love with a woman double my age bracket
Remember that Family Guy episode
Nah not so much huh?
Something similar but it's weird like
I have these dog like tendencies
Something is coming over me
Like I picture we walking hand to hand
Demand and supply our own intentional kisses
hugs from a long week to ease the forgiveness
Yet I wish it was more
I explore your eyes, your past tense, and constantly think
of our future
Launching words to this computer of a human being
beyond the age bracket of thee
Yet I'm married and she used to be
There was a time where this person would massage her feet
Treat her like a queen and smile in her direction
affection times twenty
Who am I to want to fulfill the shoes of the same size
when they are hung up in the bedroom of which me and she share
I care for her and love her like decades times two within the license
contract and so forth in God's eyes
yet I find myself unwise to the disguise of my own intentions
smell goods on deck, hair brushes strokes to perfection, and love song playlist
imperfection of a hopeless romantic
frantic on when she's going to go up the stairs
greet and talk for 10 minutes, pick up our children, walk down the stairs,
open the door, kids run amok, simple laughter, stare down of awkwardness,
my child walks up the stairs, door opens, I'll see you tomorrow,
same place, same trace, but different atmosphere
I wonder if she feels the same...as I'm below her age bracket.
 
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Casualties of Reality


I never knew the price of a dream came with inflation and state tax


That ideas and passions can melt like candle wax


Under the fires of actuality and syntax


I never knew that happiness could be held hostage by commas armed with decimals


Aspirations strangled by the weight of responsibilities

I'll never be free with Sallie Mae shackled to me
 

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Casualties of Reality


I never knew the price of a dream came with inflation and state tax


That ideas and passions can melt like candle wax


Under the fires of actuality and syntax


I never knew that happiness could be held hostage by commas armed with decimals


Aspirations strangled by the weight of responsibilities

I'll never be free with Sallie Mae shackled to me


Hitting home with this one:mjcry:
 
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California
Winter Dandelion,
Oh how brave you are
Grass around your Earth shivers
Yet here you stand, vigilant
Perched proud atop sugar land
Tall among fallen snowflakes
Born out of season, alas fitting right in
Under scope, dimensions of a globe
Full scale flurry of your fortress
Swan feathers extended to piercing sphere
Clenched tight within resolve
A deep breath held,patient to exhale
Beat heat with Summer breeze
Endured paved tundra, this concrete
When destiny completes, roots breath sigh of serene
Serenity of seams an amazing scene
Seen many a sun, moon, and star
How you reflect under their light
And when its your time, plucked with might
With your end you bring such delight
Sweet release blown kiss, your love spreads
Valiant amid this arctic confetti blossom
 
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Chasing butterflies and nostalgia trips
leading nowhere by own nightmare
I stare and glare at the simpler days
but hey, live for today tomorrow isn't promised
Yada Yada, this was me before I died
Mentally I wasn't in my own mind
my design physically was flawless
but my spirit was deadly
Laying up with every Jane, Jo, and Jessica
Fed up of the player days or should I say tryhard moments
See I wasn't much of a stud, but more so a dud
However I stay forever on the mind of her
She admired my culture differences
For instance, the first dude rocking chop sticks at the food court
What a dork but humble
She stumble at the words so I take advantage
Enter Atlantis with me
Reality sets in, I'm not happily married
But constantly want more from women except complete honesty
So it's up to me to live and let me go by
Die in my own frame
Let go of the past and start a new beginning
Such a different contrast to this fictional picture
Nonfictional chapter to a along awaited novel
 

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This was for my 1855 literature class last semester, legit teared up after reading it, my favorite poem ever

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Freedom Plow by Langston Hughes


When a man starts out with nothing,
When a man starts out with his hands
Empty, but clean,
When a man starts to build a world,
He starts first with himself
And the faith that is in his heart-
The strength there,
The will there to build.

First in the heart is the dream-
Then the mind starts seeking a way.
His eyes look out on the world,
On the great wooded world,
On the rich soil of the world,
On the rivers of the world.

The eyes see there materials for building,
See the difficulties, too, and the obstacles.
The mind seeks a way to overcome these obstacles.
The hand seeks tools to cut the wood,
To till the soil, and harness the power of the waters.
Then the hand seeks other hands to help,
A community of hands to help-
Thus the dream becomes not one man's dream alone,
But a community dream.
Not my dream alone, but our dream.
Not my world alone,
But your world and my world,
Belonging to all the hands who build.

A long time ago, but not too long ago,
Ships came from across the sea
Bringing the Pilgrims and prayer-makers,
Adventurers and booty seekers,
Free men and indentured servants,
Slave men and slave masters, all new-
To a new world, America!

With billowing sails the galleons came
Bringing men and dreams, women and dreams.
In little bands together,
Heart reaching out to heart,
Hand reaching out to hand,
They began to build our land.
Some were free hands
Seeking a greater freedom,
Some were indentured hands
Hoping to find their freedom,
Some were slave hands
Guarding in their hearts the seed of freedom,
But the word was there always:
Freedom.

Down into the earth went the plow
In the free hands and the slave hands,
In indentured hands and adventurous hands,
Turning the rich soil went the plow in many hands
That planted and harvested the food that fed
And the cotton that clothed America.
Clang against the trees went the ax into many hands
That hewed and shaped the rooftops of America.
Splash into the rivers and the seas went the boat-hulls
That moved and transported America.
Crack went the whips that drove the horses
Across the plains of America.
Free hands and slave hands,
Indentured hands, adventurous hands,
White hands and black hands
Held the plow handles,
Ax handles, hammer handles,
Launched the boats and whipped the horses
That fed and housed and moved America.
Thus together through labor,
All these hands made America.

Labor! Out of labor came villages
And the towns that grew cities.
Labor! Out of labor came the rowboats
And the sailboats and the steamboats,
Came the wagons, and the coaches,
Covered wagons, stage coaches,
Out of labor came the factories,
Came the foundries, came the railroads.
Came the marts and markets, shops and stores,
Came the mighty products moulded, manufactured,
Sold in shops, piled in warehouses,
Shipped the wide world over:
Out of labor-white hands and black hands-
Came the dream, the strength, the will,
And the way to build America.
Now it is Me here, and You there.
Now it's Manhattan, Chicago,
Seattle, New Orleans,
Boston and El Paso-
Now it's the U.S.A.

A long time ago, but not too long ago, a man said:
ALL MEN ARE CREATED EQUAL--
ENDOWED BY THEIR CREATOR
WITH CERTAIN UNALIENABLE RIGHTS--
AMONG THESE LIFE, LIBERTY
AND THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS.
His name was Jefferson. There were slaves then,
But in their hearts the slaves believed him, too,
And silently too for granted
That what he said was also meant for them.
It was a long time ago,
But not so long ago at that, Lincoln said:
NO MAN IS GOOD ENOUGH
TO GOVERN ANOTHER MAN
WITHOUT THAT OTHER'S CONSENT.
There were slaves then, too,
But in their hearts the slaves knew
What he said must be meant for every human being-
Else it had no meaning for anyone.
Then a man said:
BETTER TO DIE FREE
THAN TO LIVE SLAVES
He was a colored man who had been a slave
But had run away to freedom.
And the slaves knew
What Frederick Douglass said was true.

With John Brown at Harper's Ferry, Negroes died.
John Brown was hung.
Before the Civil War, days were dark,
And nobody knew for sure
When freedom would triumph
"Or if it would," thought some.
But others new it had to triumph.
In those dark days of slavery,
Guarding in their hearts the seed of freedom,
The slaves made up a song:
Keep Your Hand On The Plow! Hold On!
That song meant just what it said: Hold On!
Freedom will come!
Keep Your Hand On The Plow! Hold On!
Out of war it came, bloody and terrible!
But it came!
Some there were, as always,
Who doubted that the war would end right,
That the slaves would be free,
Or that the union would stand,
But now we know how it all came out.
Out of the darkest days for people and a nation,
We know now how it came out.
There was light when the battle clouds rolled away.
There was a great wooded land,
And men united as a nation.

America is a dream.
The poet says it was promises.
The people say it is promises-that will come true.
The people do not always say things out loud,
Nor write them down on paper.
The people often hold
Great thoughts in their deepest hearts
And sometimes only blunderingly express them,
Haltingly and stumblingly say them,
And faultily put them into practice.
The people do not always understand each other.
But there is, somewhere there,
Always the trying to understand,
And the trying to say,
"You are a man. Together we are building our land."

America!
Land created in common,
Dream nourished in common,
Keep your hand on the plow! Hold on!
If the house is not yet finished,
Don't be discouraged, builder!
If the fight is not yet won,
Don't be weary, soldier!
The plan and the pattern is here,
Woven from the beginning
Into the warp and woof of America:
ALL MEN ARE CREATED EQUAL.
NO MAN IS GOOD ENOUGH
TO GOVERN ANOTHER MAN
WITHOUT HIS CONSENT.
BETTER DIE FREE,
THAN TO LIVE SLAVES.
Who said those things? Americans!
Who owns those words? America!
Who is America? You, me!
We are America!
To the enemy who would conquer us from without,
We say, NO!
To the enemy who would divide
And conquer us from within,
We say, NO!
FREEDOM!
BROTHERHOOD!
DEMOCRACY!
To all the enemies of these great words:
We say, NO!

A long time ago,
An enslaved people heading toward freedom
Made up a song:
Keep Your Hand On The Plow! Hold On!
The plow plowed a new furrow
Across the field of history.
Into that furrow the freedom seed was dropped.
From that seed a tree grew, is growing, will ever grow.
That tree is for everybody,
For all America, for all the world.
May its branches spread and shelter grow
Until all races and all peoples know its shade.
KEEP YOUR HAND ON THE PLOW! HOLD ON!
 

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How y'all not Gon tell me we had this.

I'll drop something tomorrow for the thread
 

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Wow, wouldn't think y'all would be into poetry. I've been rapping since 15(I'm 18 now) and I recently got into structured poetry as a means of expanding my creative scope. I'll drop something for y'all soon
 

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This thread was a manifestation of the pain I felt during that time

I finally back on track and emotional well again.
 

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man i seen a poem elsewhere that i wrote online. Might have to start reserving my shyt ... *sighs*
dont know whether to be pissed off OR flattered.​
 
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