the Write a short Verse 2k16 thread

[Yoda]

made a similar thread years ago. leh do it again brehs.


yo


the way i spit is so unreal
Yoda the man, yes he the real deal holyfield
i fukk with young thug and blu, too
bump everything in my car via bluetooth
no soo woo but i bleed rap,
now im done and i would like a lil feeback.

 

[Yoda]

LOL that really sucked.

@Malcom Rhyme King ... u are the rhyme king. lets see what u got breh.

 

[Prince Cairo]

now im done and i would like a lil feeback.

The verse sucked.

 

[Yoda]

The verse sucked.

i mean i know. where are your bars at???

 

[010101]

heinz colored helicopter
thots scrapping tryna hop in
know they mad that they ain't me
i'm so glad that i ain't them
looking at em tryna take aim
lil peons with a deuce deuce
pardon me i gotta laugh what that lil shyt finna do¿
excuse me i gotta ask what exactly are you tryna prove¿
lil boi you must ain't heard
big money buys bigger guns
racks on racks on racks
that drumline go parupapum
make you dance to the snare and bass
you hit the 5gs like webstar
nobody lied i am a star and the pistol still in the car


yo somebody should move that freestyle friday thread from the locker room to here
this shyt is fun jahahahahaa

http://www.thecoli.com/threads/coli-freestyle-friday.340034/

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[010101]

The verse sucked.

wack freestyles always brought humor to the lunch table ciphers jahahahahaa
let em rock

i mean i know. where are your bars at???

word lighten up b
this shyt is just for laughs

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[Super Future Luther King Jr.]

I got you @Yoda



Yo Mother's Day was chill

Woke up with the seed, Proceed to pay some bills

Hit the store to grab balloons and flowers, Just to make it real

Made a meal/mill, Mommy/Mami looking at me like I made the kill

Blazing still, She something like how summer in Jamaica feel

5'5, but taller when she walking in them latest heels

Nice guys will holler at her often, she won't take their deals

Ain't that trill?

She got me feeling like a weightless pill

Adapted to the game and now we both be making major scrill

Gyeah

 

[Jay Kast]

Wonderin if today is my last day
Spent roaches in my ashtray
Two dollars to my last name
fukked up to go out broke and only half baked

If thats how it go, then so be it
Used to bein solo, front porch chiefin
Too many nikkas bicker back n forth wit that yo yo beefin
Causin cold wars, city feelin that ol' Soviet

I did dirt in my days
Enough to fill up a grave
A rose cant grow if it sit in the shade
My skull undeveloped- in need of more jewels
Ill let you tell it, but Im focused on the scene in the news
So Ill go out, just make sure my dogs have been fed
Pour some hen for my dogs that got lead
Pray that my nephew dont live as hard as I did
Wit these kind of thoughts doggin his head
Cuz wit the way I live dawg, Im already dead

 

[SAINT]

word is bond, today was a good day like cube,
one of my broads hit me, mannnnnnnn the reefer had her tweaking
but she from the "A", so i put the "D" in her two eyes, zone defense.

Desiigner

 

[Saiyajin]

word is bond, today was a good day like cube,
one of my broads hit me, mannnnnnnn the reefer had her tweaking
but she from the "A", so i put the "D" in her two eyes, zone defense.

Desiigner

 

[CHAIN]

Looking at these simps that love this thot era
Grooming side pieces like a mutton chop wearer.
I'm kinda like Zeus and these sluts are not Hera
Might run up in my funeral to snuff my pallbearers.
That there is hate, me, I text a ho... 'shoo'
It's a racket when I step it up...like snow shoes.

 

[AldavisAlbundyAllah!]

READ AS IF YOU DOSING OFF***SPEED UP IN MIDDLE ***

Coli flow, (Long pause)
Sipn that syrup got me moving Coli server slow..
Petty post,(Long pause )
nikkas dappin my ish but my reps needs plenty mo..
Here we go, (Long pause )
Same 2 nikkas derailing the thread on captian save a hoe..
Let em tho, Enjoy the show, we eating no lunch•able
Meme that, gif drop, quote if past words are expos•able,
beast mode, Fuc•cc•ery over•load
I'm the fuc•cc•ery over•lord
Self made enter•tain•ment Is the motherboard
The fuc•cc•ery is too much force
They Can't Chew no mo
(Mumble for 2.5 bars )

Snoop dog snap as I make my way

Self praise To AldavisAlbundyAllah....Always, ( Long pause )

Happy mothers day