hook had promise, till you get to the lack of convincability .
plus, complete lack of vocal tonality missing verses.
duke, started rapping and I could not believe a word he said.
the second verse was better cause of the biter based flow.
another reason why the payola fake sales and radio spin based work of the twenty year anniversary gap of 1993.
of wannabe bone biter based music to cartoon style based delivery.
all to hide a lack of skills.
ultimately will hurt rap as a whole.
as far as quality submissions, in every subgenre of rap.
Art Barr