tonedeff is so technically sound

[pointproven214]

[Verse 3 - Tonedeff]
Say what you want, but don't ever claim that you want it
Stay in the closet or you'll sustain so much pain
That you'll vomit solid objects you never swallowed
Like hollow organs, you'll cough up dried esauphagus knots and notches
We're the marvelous two that are part of the crew
That came to astonish, The Plague is brolic
Scrape your face with abrasive cleanser, say that we're raining comet
Fame's a promise you'll never fulfill, I'll just set up the kill
Substantial lances in your neck, and then sets your head on a hill
Really, for the world to see, everybody wanna get busy
Until they really gotta twirl with me; I score with ease
And floor your team I'm sure you dream of fukkin'
If weren't for your ball disease, you'd prolly skeez a broad or three
But all of 'em see that you ain't nothing but a poor MC
So, if you're looking for your pride, and a reason to die
In the blink of an
Eye, then keep in mind that they all with me
Now, hold your screams in, you don't wanna play in the court
The kings in From Newport to Kingston
I'll give you more defeats in wars than Normandy
Complete with hordes of soldiers beefin'
Keep your orders straight, cause sweepin me is more than fate could even orchestrate
Erasin more pieces of you than your whore's abortion takes

 

[The Jewnited States]

yes very true. he approaches rhyme writing very technically and scientific like.

here is his "Flow Notation System"

Flow Notation System ‹ tonedeff

Introducing FNS (Flow.Notation.System).
Developed by Tonedeff as a timing gauge and visual teaching tool for hip-hop lyricists. Utilizing the FNS regularly will increase an emcee’s precision of delivery, as it creates a basic rhythmic filter during the writing process. Also, the FNS puts an end to the notorious “rough draft” verse (a verse which seems on rhythm upon creation, but reveals timing flaws upon read-back). In essence, FNS allows technically savvy emcees to fine tune their lyrics immediately AS THEY’RE BEING WRITTEN.

Example Verse Format (4/4)
1) Standard rhyme format consists of 4 counts per line = (1 BAR) /
2) Each line (bar) should be numbered to track verse length
3) Standard verse lengths are multiples of 8 (ie. 8/16/24/32)
4) Every fourth bar is a ‘power line’. These lines are emphasized.

Using FNS for Writing/Reading
While constructing verses, simply mark the standard ONE and TWO symbols above the syllable that corresponds to the beat. (see. Figure 1.)

:: Figure:1

The ONE is placed where the first kick in the bar is, and the TWO is placed on the first snare. By default, 1 Bar will contain 2 sets of these symbols.

• Anwhere there are no words on the kick or snare, insert the correspond HOLD symbol: (see Figure 2.)

:: Figure:2

• Anywhere there is a quick “twist” in the words, (comprised of 3-syllables on 24th-Note timing) insert the FLIP symbol underneath the words to connect them. The more of these in a row, the longer the FLIP combination: (see Figure 3.)

:: Figure:3

• In order to maintain a continuous flow, breath-plotting is essential. The less breaths, the more continuous the flow. Insert a BREATH bracket where needed. (see Figure 4.)

:: Figure:4

 

[pointproven214]

yes very true. he approaches rhyme writing very technically and scientific like.

here is his "Flow Notation System"

Flow Notation System ‹ tonedeff

Introducing FNS (Flow.Notation.System).
Developed by Tonedeff as a timing gauge and visual teaching tool for hip-hop lyricists. Utilizing the FNS regularly will increase an emcee’s precision of delivery, as it creates a basic rhythmic filter during the writing process. Also, the FNS puts an end to the notorious “rough draft” verse (a verse which seems on rhythm upon creation, but reveals timing flaws upon read-back). In essence, FNS allows technically savvy emcees to fine tune their lyrics immediately AS THEY’RE BEING WRITTEN.

Example Verse Format (4/4)
1) Standard rhyme format consists of 4 counts per line = (1 BAR) /
2) Each line (bar) should be numbered to track verse length
3) Standard verse lengths are multiples of 8 (ie. 8/16/24/32)
4) Every fourth bar is a ‘power line’. These lines are emphasized.

Using FNS for Writing/Reading
While constructing verses, simply mark the standard ONE and TWO symbols above the syllable that corresponds to the beat. (see. Figure 1.)

:: Figure:1

The ONE is placed where the first kick in the bar is, and the TWO is placed on the first snare. By default, 1 Bar will contain 2 sets of these symbols.

• Anwhere there are no words on the kick or snare, insert the correspond HOLD symbol: (see Figure 2.)

:: Figure:2

• Anywhere there is a quick “twist” in the words, (comprised of 3-syllables on 24th-Note timing) insert the FLIP symbol underneath the words to connect them. The more of these in a row, the longer the FLIP combination: (see Figure 3.)

:: Figure:3

• In order to maintain a continuous flow, breath-plotting is essential. The less breaths, the more continuous the flow. Insert a BREATH bracket where needed. (see Figure 4.)

:: Figure:4

his rhyme schemes and the way he places his rhymes interally between bar measures is ridiculous.

 

[thekingsmen]

He use to be good.

 

[KingsOfKings]

 

[KingsOfKings]

 

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