Verses you could easily tell were Ghostwritten..

Yehuda

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especially that Side To Side verse..I remember being in HS when that song came out & telling other kids in school that T.I wrote that verse..I was telling them listen to that verse & especially the line when he said "I walk up in the club & ask these hoes what it's hittin fo"..It sounds just like TIP..Same cadence & everything..They were like :ohhh:..This is before talking about ghostwriters was a "thing" & I remember talking about that verse on SOHH & the Ill Community on All Hip Hop when it was jumping :russ:

Everything about that verse screams Clifford lol, especially the delivery... "You know I got the stacks on DECK, if you ain't tip-tipping you a lame and THAT'S THAT" :heh:
 

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Everything about that verse screams Clifford lol, especially the delivery... "You know I got the stacks on DECK, if you ain't tip-tipping you a lame and THAT'S THAT" :heh:
CLEARLY :mjlol:.. Especially when he said that
Kids in school were really like Bow Wow been killing it..Which he kinda was mainstream & popularity wise but That Side To Side verse plus that Oh I Think They Like Me remix verse had niccas going crazy & I remember looking at them like :comeon: he just got TI writing his stuff now
I say all the time how fans should NOT be complaining about how music is now..Yea it could be better but those years when D4L,Dem Franchise Boyz & the rest of the snap era was running shyt when I was in HS were dark times :mjcry:
 

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:shaq2:

You can clearly tell Treach wrote that. Eazy even kept Treach "ooohhh a new jack a new jack" part in.
 

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don't EVER question Titi Boi's pen game :ufdup:

(2nd verse)


Slightly above average lyricism, nothing to ride home for, 2 chainz is known for making club bangers, homie needs to keep that pen tucked and stay in his lane, he ain't really doing nothing with it
 
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Can't believe people are getting shyt written by 2 chainz, 2 chainz i one of the worst lyricist in hip hop, I don't get why people like him so much
I'm listening to you right now, and you have some really basic rhyme patterns
2chainz verse on Freddie Gibbs "neighborhood hoes" is more lyrical than your first verse on "soul music" which is supposed to be "heartfelt and soulful"...It's not bad but you can't talk about anybody's structure, I don't hear you hit more than 5 syllables, breh breh. Also, stop buying soundcloud listens. Your shyt sound good tho...
Get rid of that Kanye flow.

 

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I'm listening to you right now, and you have some really basic rhyme patterns
2chainz verse on Freddie Gibbs "neighborhood hoes" is more lyrical than your first verse on "soul music" which is supposed to be "heartfelt and soulful"...It's not bad but you can't talk about anybody's structure, I don't hear you hit more than 5 syllables, breh breh. Also, stop buying soundcloud listens. Your shyt sound good tho...
Get rid of that Kanye flow.



I'm not buying soundcloud listens, why would I do that, I get my shyt reposted to different pages and I post it on forums and some people fukk with it, I never claimed to be a professional and I'm not comparing myself to 2 chainz, I'm speaking from a fan of rap perspective, you can compare my shyt to his.. I know it's not the same level. I'm new to this and I'm still learning, I'm not a Kendrick or a Nas and I probably never will be but I enjoy that shyt and it may turn into money. I just started rapping in February breh, but I still stand by my point, for a pro rapper, his lyrics are basic af, that's not his lane though, he's better for making club music and hype music, shyt is not lyrical to me. To me lyrical rap comes from Kendrick, Ab-Soul, Jay Elect, and Immortal Technique... just to name a few

edit: will say this, I know you were coming at an angle trying to put me down and shyt, but I'm glad you mentioned my rhyme scheme, because I neglect that, now I know what to work on, most people don't keep it real with me as far as my song, they say its lit but don't tell me what I need to work
 
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