I'm listening to you right now, and you have some really basic rhyme patterns
2chainz verse on Freddie Gibbs "neighborhood hoes" is more lyrical than your first verse on "soul music" which is supposed to be "heartfelt and soulful"...It's not bad but you can't talk about anybody's structure, I don't hear you hit more than 5 syllables, breh breh. Also, stop buying soundcloud listens. Your shyt sound good tho...
Get rid of that Kanye flow.
I'm not buying soundcloud listens, why would I do that, I get my shyt reposted to different pages and I post it on forums and some people fukk with it, I never claimed to be a professional and I'm not comparing myself to 2 chainz, I'm speaking from a fan of rap perspective, you can compare my shyt to his.. I know it's not the same level. I'm new to this and I'm still learning, I'm not a Kendrick or a Nas and I probably never will be but I enjoy that shyt and it may turn into money. I just started rapping in February breh, but I still stand by my point, for a pro rapper, his lyrics are basic af, that's not his lane though, he's better for making club music and hype music, shyt is not lyrical to me. To me lyrical rap comes from Kendrick, Ab-Soul, Jay Elect, and Immortal Technique... just to name a few
edit: will say this, I know you were coming at an angle trying to put me down and shyt, but I'm glad you mentioned my rhyme scheme, because I neglect that, now I know what to work on, most people don't keep it real with me as far as my song, they say its lit but don't tell me what I need to work