which example is better in terms of rhyming.

[pointproven214]

Young fukks spitting at me, young rappers getting at me
My nikka Big predicted this shyt exactly

as long as it don't look like this

and looks more like this

Fine; it cost you nothing - pay me no mind
Look, I'm on my grind, cousin, ain't got time for fronting

 

[LandryFieldsDad]

Ronnie is back

 

[Hybrinetics]

You dont know how to bold multis do you? The first should look like


Young fukks spitting at me, young rappers getting at me
My nikka Big predicted this shyt exactly

First two lines were better, and why did you bold "for"?

 

[pointproven214]

You dont know how to bold multis do you? The first should look like


Young fukks spitting at me, young rappers getting at me
My nikka Big predicted this shyt exactly

First two lines were better, and why did you bold "for"?

no i don't know man.

 

[Hybrinetics]

"Come and ride wit me, hang out on that south side wit me, old school guy spiffy like a Porsche five fifty
Catch me if you can haters, know you wanna try'n get me, tellin lies quit me, sayin they got drunk n high wit me"


Im that vet MC the pro
You cant threaten me to go
I got recipes for those who are yet to be exposed, dude my specialty is flow
They wont let me in the doe becuz you best believe they know that Ill rip sevnty in a row -non conformist K rino


Your back is dropped over the top of some jagged rocks
These avrage flocks watch me like Magnavoxs, I shatter blocks and ravage spots
The aerobot who's so past the top I piss on astronauts with massive shots, I'm like two surgeons I'm a paradox " - Metaphor labyrinth

 

[pointproven214]

"Come and ride wit me, hang out on that south side wit me, old school guy spiffy like a Porsche five fifty
Catch me if you can haters, know you wanna try'n get me, tellin lies quit me, sayin they got drunk n high wit me"


Im that vet MC the pro
You cant threaten me to go
I got recipes for those who are yet to be exposed, dude my specialty is flow
They wont let me in the doe becuz you best believe they know that Ill rip sevnty in a row -non conformist K rino


Your back is dropped over the top of some jagged rocks
These avrage flocks watch me like Magnavoxs, I shatter blocks and ravage spots
The aerobot who's so past the top I piss on astronauts with massive shots, I'm like two surgeons I'm a paradox " - Metaphor labyrinth

so each syllable should rhyme or most of them if so would this be a multi




Mannerisms
spanish wisdoms

 

[Hybrinetics]

Yea, or very close to it. Its much more impressive when you can rhyme multis multiple times in one line and the syllables match too. Its like rhymes inside of rhymes inside of rhymes


"See these stupid guys utilize foolish pride
My vocal shot through his ride,
didn't hit him but scared him so bad the fool just died, left him crucified with a noose applied
Charged me with double murder, his soul left his flesh and commited suicide
Neutralize crews, how can you survive?
My paper and pen explode like planets and meteors when the two collide, you was tried then euthanized
Me with a mic is like an arsonist and a blow torch- unsupervised
What I shoot'll make Jupiter move aside
Magnificent lyrical bigamist, verbal homicide is my newest bride, separate the truth from lies
Treat you like fast food places do ya fries, murda you supersize
See ya death hand was willingly dealt
I got a stealth that'll make facilities melt in my utility belt.. " -forensics K rino

 

[pointproven214]

Yea, or very close to it. Its much more impressive when you can rhyme multis multiple times in one line and the syllables match too. Its like rhymes inside of rhymes inside of rhymes


"See these stupid guys utilize foolish pride
My vocal shot through his ride,
didn't hit him but scared him so bad the fool just died, left him crucified with a noose applied
Charged me with double murder, his soul left his flesh and commited suicide
Neutralize crews, how can you survive?
My paper and pen explode like planets and meteors when the two collide, you was tried then euthanized
Me with a mic is like an arsonist and a blow torch- unsupervised
What I shoot'll make Jupiter move aside
Magnificent lyrical bigamist, verbal homicide is my newest bride, separate the truth from lies
Treat you like fast food places do ya fries, murda you supersize
See ya death hand was willingly dealt
I got a stealth that'll make facilities melt in my utility belt.. " -forensics K rino

[Jay-Z]
Mannerisms of a young Bobby DeNiro, spent spanish wisdoms
in a whip with dinero, crime organized like the pharoah - bring it on jay-z

is what i bolded a multi.

 

[SixxiS]

so each syllable should rhyme or most of them if so would this be a multi




Mannerisms
spanish wisdoms

 

[pointproven214]

That's the first thing you thought of to rhyme mannerisms with

jay-z wrote this not me

and second it makes sense the context of the line


Mannerisms of a young Bobby DeNiro, spent spanish wisdoms
in a whip with dinero, crime organized like the pharoah

 

[Hybrinetics]

Yeah thats a multi. On paper though some multis not might match exactly depending on your accent, so you can twist it when rapping. K is just a good example of multis that nearly always match perfectly on paper

 

[Whitty Hutton]

StFu everybody with this nerdy thread

 

[the cac mamba]

[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

 

[Hybrinetics]

what is that?

 

[LandryFieldsDad]

[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

He laid low for a while
Started with the tupac "apreication" real slow
Then went right back to full blown retard mode