Carmichael had a spark and he can write full on tv shows but this bizarre avant garde sh!t is where he lost it.It's weird stand up comedy is in this weird place because a lot of would be comedians are sticking to the social media circuit. I think we had a golden era with the kings of comedy, Chappelle, Rock, etc. All performing during a time when stand up was a requirement to make it in comedy. Now we got dudes like Druski who's whole schtick is to do skits but would actually bomb hard on stage.
The people you mentioned in the OP are OK. I just think the talent is out there but they are pursuing comedy in other outlets