"You Share that Girl", the musical....

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You made this song? It's amazing what are you doing giving it away for free this needs to be played on the radio...needs a few tweaks has to be longer and the hook maybe needs to come sooner but I do like the backstory the only issue is radio listeners have short attention span...but I wouldn't change it just make it longer and maybe have the other dude rap a little...this is a hit don't let some other artist steal this one
 

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You made this song? It's amazing what are you doing giving it away for free this needs to be played on the radio...needs a few tweaks has to be longer and the hook maybe needs to come sooner but I do like the backstory the only issue is radio listeners have short attention span...but I wouldn't change it just make it longer and maybe have the other dude rap a little...this is a hit don't let some other artist steal this one

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damn this song is :wow: :ahh: this sounds like some R Kelly, Jagged Edge 2002-2004 shyt. Amazing. You're goat off of this.
Kinda reminded me of those Mr. Bigs and R Kelly joints. :wow:

YES!!!!!!


I hope you're making money off of this. You have a great voice and if you made the beat it's nice too.


This shyt is so amazing.
 

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You made this song? It's amazing what are you doing giving it away for free this needs to be played on the radio...needs a few tweaks has to be longer and the hook maybe needs to come sooner but I do like the backstory the only issue is radio listeners have short attention span...but I wouldn't change it just make it longer and maybe have the other dude rap a little...this is a hit don't let some other artist steal this one

Thanks man.

Yeah, it's not a full song, not intended to be.....just a little fun. R&B is dead anyway in terms of mainstream. :snoop:

I write/make real songs, but it's mostly country-ish type stuff.

i need part 2

this shyt dope :lolbron:

u could create a lane on some rnb riff raff shyt
:ooh:

I just got an idea to make another one called, "Girl We Ain't Gon Make It" :russ:

Dont know when I'll get around to it, tho.
 
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