im going to try to not embrass you so im going to take it easy and just bold some of the lyrics
but for me to rap like a computer must be in my genes
I got a laptop in my back pocket
My pen'll go off when I half-cock it
Got a fat knot from that rap profit
Made a living and a killing off it
Ever since Bill Clinton was still in office
With Monica Lewinsky feeling on his nut-sack
I'm an MC still as honest
But as rude and as indecent as all hell
Syllables, killaholic (Kill 'em all with)
This slickety, gibbedy, hibbedy hip-hop
You don't really wanna get into a pissing match with this rappidy rap
Packing a Mac in the back of the Ac, backpack rap crap, yep, yep, yackity-yak
Now at the exact same time
I attempt these lyrical acrobat stunts while I'm practicing that
I'll still be able to break a motherfukkin' table
Over the back of a couple of fakkits and crack it in half
Only realized it was ironic I was signed to Aftermath after the fact
How could I not blow? All I do is drop F-bombs, feel my wrath of attack
Rappers are having a rough time period, here's a maxipad
It's actually disastrously bad for the wack
While I'm masterfully constructing this masterpiece as
breh he is rhyming 2-4 syllables and they all match in syllable count
while not rhyming the same word and the rhyme scheme is on some abab rhyme scheme type sh1t
But while I'm waiting, let's break this verse down a little...
but for me to rap like a computer must be in my genes
I got a
laptop in my
back pocket
My pen'll go off when I
half-cock it
He raps like a computer so he must have a laptop in his back pocket? not impressive to me.
Got a
fat knot from that
rap profit
Made a living and a
killing off it
Ever since Bill Clinton was
still in office
With Monica Le
winsky feeling on his nut-sack
even what your saying about the rhymes themselves aren't impressive. i've heard several mc's do shyt like this, nothing special at all. that reference also is played out.
I'm an
MC still as honest
But as rude and as indecent as all hell
ok... nothing impressive here..
Syllables, killaholic (Kill 'em all with)
This
slickety, gibbedy, hibbedy hip-hop
You don't really wanna get into a pissing match with this
rappidy rap
Packing a
Mac in the back of the Ac,
backpack rap crap, yep, yep,
yackity-yak
this shyt us wack...it's throwing a bunch of words together and using the pun quote, terrible.
this is boring me actually. so ill do the rest in one.
Now
at the exact same time
I attempt these lyrical acrobat stunts while I'm
practicing that
I'll still be able to break a motherfukkin' table
Over the back of a couple of fakkits and
crack it in half
Only realized it was ironic I was signed to Aftermath
after the fact
How could I not blow? All I do is drop F-bombs, feel my
wrath of attack
Rappers are having a rough time period, here's a maxipad
It's
actually dis
astrously bad for the wack
While I'm masterfully constructing this
masterpiece as
talking about pissing matches? he's not saying nothing dope in the verse and the lyrics aren't even dope. lyrical acrobats while im practising that is cool, but not amazing.
that veres is garbage to me, 2nd verse was better.
p.s: most of what i wrote got deleted again, oh well.