As corny as Eminem became, nobody today f**kin with old em

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I dont think you can compare the two. Eminem, when he writes, goes in looking for rhymes. He's saying "how can I make this rhyme" so he has the rhyming words, then fills it in from there. Thats how you end up with antelopes and cantaloupes. Lupe has what he wants to say then makes it rhyme. Thats how you end up with The Coolest.

In order to compare rhyme schemes of the two compare similar songs. Compare Rock Bottom to Where I'm From... Not one where Em is rambling off about anything. Then tell me if the rhyme schemes are better.

or compare one of those joints to Dumb it Down...
 

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I dont think you can compare the two. Eminem, when he writes, goes in looking for rhymes. He's saying "how can I make this rhyme" so he has the rhyming words, then fills it in from there. Thats how you end up with antelopes and cantaloupes. Lupe has what he wants to say then makes it rhyme. Thats how you end up with The Coolest.

In order to compare rhyme schemes of the two compare similar songs. Compare Rock Bottom to Where I'm From... Not one where Em is rambling off about anything. Then tell me if the rhyme schemes are better.

or compare one of those joints to Dumb it Down...


eminem uses assonance and mixes it with perfect rhyming he does not limit himself at all in terms of his rhymes. his pronouncation of words and mis pronouncing of words. also gives him the edge in in terms of rhyme schemes he has more words to work with in terms of rhyming.

but by the way eminem rhyme schemes on rock bottom is better big homie imo
 

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eminem uses assonance and mixes it with perfect rhyming he does not limit himself at all in terms of his rhymes. his pronouncation of words and mis pronouncing of words. also gives him the edge in in terms of rhyme schemes he has more words to work with in terms of rhyming.

but by the way eminem rhyme schemes on rock bottom is better big homie imo

Nah, Rock Bottom has your typical rhymes... And personally I dislike mispronouncing of words to make rhymes UNLESS it is mispronounced, but is regularly pronounced that way due to regional dialect or accent. So when Lupe says, "Disclaimer, this rhamer" im like :wtf: "nicca just say rhymer and sacrifice the rhyme" but if someone pronounces "man" as "mayne" I'm cool wit it
 

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Nah, Rock Bottom has your typical rhymes... And personally I dislike mispronouncing of words to make rhymes UNLESS it is mispronounced, but is regularly pronounced that way due to regional dialect or accent. So when Lupe says, "Disclaimer, this rhamer" im like :wtf: "nicca just say rhymer and sacrifice the rhyme" but if someone pronounces "man" as "mayne" I'm cool wit it

you mis understood what i was saying i wasn't saying that rock bottom had the crazy rhymes like him mis pronouncing words and crazy bending words like say in the song loseyourself.

what i was saying was is that is what eminem has in his aresnal the assonance rhymes the bending words etc


and rock bottom has better rhymes imo


[Verse One:]
I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bytch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless
 

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I dont think you can compare the two. Eminem, when he writes, goes in looking for rhymes. He's saying "how can I make this rhyme" so he has the rhyming words, then fills it in from there. Thats how you end up with antelopes and cantaloupes. Lupe has what he wants to say then makes it rhyme. Thats how you end up with The Coolest.

In order to compare rhyme schemes of the two compare similar songs. Compare Rock Bottom to Where I'm From... Not one where Em is rambling off about anything. Then tell me if the rhyme schemes are better.

or compare one of those joints to Dumb it Down...

i agree with this
 
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Lu aint no slouch
but he aint seein EM....

Just doesnt have the hits


Imagination


Feelings


Back and Forths..
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2AtKbT8-hnQ]Eminem - Bad Meets Evil [HD] [Lyrics] - YouTube[/ame]

Crew Love


Longevity


No need to bring up the 313/Low Down dirty shame days....or the Ja Rule/Canibus/Benzino beefs...

Lu to me is a poster boy for "had a spark when he started..." he aint trash or wack or nuttin....he just not EM:manny:
 
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Lu aint no slouch
but he aint seein EM....

Just doesnt have the hits

Imagination

Feelings

Back and Forths..

Crew Love

Longevity

No need to bring up the 313/Low Down dirty shame days....or the Ja Rule/Canibus/Benzino beefs...

Lu to me is a poster boy for "had a spark when he started..." he aint trash or wack or nuttin....he just not EM:manny:

Hits?



Imagination?



Feelings?



Back & Forths?



Crew Love?



Longevity?

F&L, TC, LASERS, F&LII >>>>> SSLP, MMLP, TES, Encore

I never seen someone be wrong about everything as well as you were with this post.
 
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Hits?


Imagination?


Feelings?


Back & Forths?


Crew Love?


Longevity?

F&L, TC, LASERS, F&LII >>>>> SSLP, MMLP, TES, Encore

I never seen someone be wrong about everything as well as you were with this post.

As i said....lu is no slouch...

But he clearly fell off after food and liquor 1...his best days were the 1&15th shyt and f&l 1

Just because he can do those things does not mean he does them better than em.

Btw lasers sucks...an that last shyt was a weedplate..cant even refer to it as a successor.

While im here so does relapse and encore....
 

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Nah, Rock Bottom has your typical rhymes... And personally I dislike mispronouncing of words to make rhymes UNLESS it is mispronounced, but is regularly pronounced that way due to regional dialect or accent. So when Lupe says, "Disclaimer, this rhamer" im like :wtf: "nicca just say rhymer and sacrifice the rhyme" but if someone pronounces "man" as "mayne" I'm cool wit it

:lolbron:
 

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Lupe is a much better rapper then eminem


eminem would rap circles around lupe as it is been said already eminem has better multisyllable rhyme patterns then lupe.


example


His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now


eminem rhyme schemes are so sick
 
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