Check My Song out Honest Opinions

[just my thoughts]

Available on Spotify and tidal as well

 

[CarltonJunior]

I recognize the sample from a Q track

Song ain't bad but you sound a little too loud on the beat. That's all I can really say

 

[A.V.]

The first few seconds had me thinking it would be mixed a little better than it ended up being. Literally the first few seconds of you talking had me like but once the verse drops and you hear the contrast in recording quality, it's like


Tighten up your flow/rhyme structure a little bit & def get your engineer tightened up. I'd work on some diversity in your delivery. Meaning switch your flow a little bit, don't make it too easy for the listener to guess your next bar. So many "fans" are rappers nowadays, that the consumer is more critical now, then they've ever been.


Other than that, track is dope. Beat is fire too, just feel like you could've come a lil better. Salute.

 

[Sauce Dab]

The first few seconds had me thinking it would be mixed a little better than it ended up being. Literally the first few seconds of you talking had me like but once the verse drops and you hear the contrast in recording quality, it's like


Tighten up your flow/rhyme structure a little bit & def get your engineer tightened up. I'd work on some diversity in your delivery. Meaning switch your flow a little bit, don't make it too easy for the listener to guess your next bar. So many "fans" are rappers nowadays, that the consumer is more critical now, then they've ever been.


Other than that, track is dope. Beat is fire too, just feel like you could've come a lil better. Salute.

I pretty much came in to say the bold. It's not trash but after the first minute and a half it gets stale. Keep working tho

 

[just my thoughts]

Thanks for the feedback

 

[A.V.]

Leave some feedback on mine, homie even if u think its you garbage, I enjoy constructive criticism



I'm tryna get my views up like urs


http://www.thecoli.com/threads/so-s...nner-alert-spooky.411565/page-2#post-18333978


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