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The first few seconds had me thinking it would be mixed a little better than it ended up being. Literally the first few seconds of you talking had me like :ehh: but once the verse drops and you hear the contrast in recording quality, it's like :stopitslime:


Tighten up your flow/rhyme structure a little bit & def get your engineer tightened up. I'd work on some diversity in your delivery. Meaning switch your flow a little bit, don't make it too easy for the listener to guess your next bar. So many "fans" are rappers nowadays, that the consumer is more critical now, then they've ever been.


Other than that, track is dope. Beat is fire too, just feel like you could've come a lil better. Salute.
 
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AVthaPHARAOH said:
The first few seconds had me thinking it would be mixed a little better than it ended up being. Literally the first few seconds of you talking had me like :ehh: but once the verse drops and you hear the contrast in recording quality, it's like :stopitslime:


Tighten up your flow/rhyme structure a little bit & def get your engineer tightened up. I'd work on some diversity in your delivery. Meaning switch your flow a little bit, don't make it too easy for the listener to guess your next bar. So many "fans" are rappers nowadays, that the consumer is more critical now, then they've ever been.


Other than that, track is dope. Beat is fire too, just feel like you could've come a lil better. Salute.
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I pretty much came in to say the bold. It's not trash but after the first minute and a half it gets stale. Keep working tho :ehh:
 
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