Check Out My Verse to Jay-Z's "Heaven" (let me know if I'm garbage)

[Tuling]

https://soundcloud.com/logicfirst/nysom72113
still better than monkey flippin rappers @intilectual recipricol

 

[BastardChild]

 

[LogicFirst]

you ice cold my nikka. I aint mad at cha

 

[LogicFirst]

I aint mad at cha

 

[LogicFirst]

"Goddamn, you ain't got no damn skills"

icey

 

[BastardChild]

I aint mad at cha

 

[NotaPAWG]

bro, you can't rap.

 

[Tuling]

You gotta nice voice n/h

i can agree with this

 

[LogicFirst]

tell me how you really feel

 

[LogicFirst]

bro, you can't rap.

bout to go back to the drawing board. you nikkaz want better lyrics? better flow? let me guess; both

 

[BastardChild]

nah i want you to retire from rap and get a job at zaxbys.. then i will come and let you know how good you make chicken

 

[Poetical Poltergeist]

bout to go back to the drawing board. you nikkaz want better lyrics? better flow? let me guess; both

Challenge yourself..write a story rap over an original beat and see how it comes out. Tighten up your flow maybe don't sound like u wanna take a nap seem interested in your rhymes. Write a whole song with a theme.

 

[LogicFirst]

Challenge yourself..write a story rap over an original beat and see how it comes out. Tighten up your flow maybe don't sound like u wanna take a nap seem interested in your rhymes. Write a whole song with a theme.

okay, okay

 

[LogicFirst]

nah i want you to retire from rap and get a job at zaxbys.. then i will come and let you know how good you make chicken

never heard of Zaxbys

 

[smitty22]

somebody gotta feelin me

Rat ta ta tat goes the mouse trap