Colored People webseries (Directed & written by Coli member ghostwriterx) EP04 is up!

[SlowPaceThrillah]

Hardest part was finding cheap locations to shoot. Most of the webseries out look like they're shot in somebody's house. Finding locations like office buildings in LA is not easy, most people want a grip.

Should've told them you were shooting a promo to uplift local real estate values through the medium of racially provocative comedic webisodes

 

[threattonature]

Yeah I wrote this one. That's what I was worried about especially in this one. I kind of od'ed on the race stuff in this one because it was the first one and I really wanted to set a tone. I'd like to think we do a better job in the upcoming eps and they don't come off too cliche, we'll see. Writing short eps like this is really difficult as you don't have a lot of time to be subtle, build up to things etc. I'll keep your thoughts in mind as I write more of these.

This was gone be my only complaint. The humor didn't seem to be nuanced enough but at the same time I understand you want to pack as much in a short span as possible on this sort of project. Loved the look and the pacing of it. Only other criticism was the "why do black people" "why do Indian people" vibe started settling in but ties back to the first point. Definitely has potential and I'll be checking for more.

 

[USSInsiders]

I liked it, kinda wished it was longer

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[#1 pick]

@ghostwriterx it has potential. Your star this the Ali looking black guy. Jada and Evan are a little forced but have potential. The Curry(Indian) guy can be a great one liner if you use him right.

 

[cfountain]

liked, subscribed on YouTube.

dapped and plus repped on here.

good luck to you man

 

[jadillac]

@ghostwriterx

Pretty good for a start. Humor needs to be pushed a little further than the stereotypical that's been done. But good direction, the actors appear to be legit and the production values look solid.



Oh,and it's nice to see Smokey Robinson in his TV debut

 

[JasonSJackson]

I love the support brothas keep it going

 

[Walt]

Watched and enjoyed it, some rough spots and it's not polished yet, but that comes with time, so I'll check back in with it as you keep going.

 

[MostReal]

cool stuff breh, great execution


old black dude is best character, has great delivery & naturally funny
black woman just a lil 'too angry' though

 

[TheNatureBoy]

Good job for the 1st episode, most of the advice and things to improve have already been pointed out. Didn't realize thecoli had people doing web series which is cool to see . The diversity workshops have a lot of potential for humor. Agreed with the comments that Paul Mooney looking dude was the funniest.

 

[GreatestLaker]

"Black people don't take the stairs. That's why we have elevators."

This is supposed to be funny?

 

[King Biko]

Jada can get the wood tho

 

[ℒℴѵℯJay ELECTUA]

it has potential but becareful with the over usage of stereo typing..

 

[STAN JONES]

i wasnt feeling it

i'll check for the other episodes to see if it gets better though

 

[Achille]

Keep up the good work.