is the mf doom way of rhyming more complex then any other rapper

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i refuse to conform
like rhyming each syllable.



This is how it should look:

My last day (A) as lie upon my death bed (B)
Counting back ways (A), in which I felt no contentment (B)
Wanted to create (A), but was afraid and just suppressed (B) it
My mind glazed (A) began to think that it’d be best to let (B)
My aspirations fade (A) away and just accept it (B)
The truth I face (A) came all too unexpected (B)
I was betrayed (A) by every single little second (B)
Instead of great (A) now I’ve just become complacent (B)
I lie awake, afraid (A) my life had no purpose (C)
Lifetime of days (A) and not a single one was even worth it (C)
 

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As horrible as the powers at the :hamster: were, at least they would consistently ban this imbecile.
How does he have a new thread or two on the 1st page every time i check this forum??
 

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As horrible as the powers at the :hamster: were, at least they would consistently ban this imbecile.
How does he have a new thread or two on the 1st page every time i check this forum??
i dont know why they let him keep makin threads

its a fukkin embarassment. blatant trolling
 

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like rhyming each syllable.
This is how it should look:
My last day (A) as lie upon my death bed (B)
Counting back ways (A), in which I felt no contentment (B)
Wanted to create (A), but was afraid and just suppressed (B) it
My mind glazed (A) began to think that it’d be best to let (B)
My aspirations fade (A) away and just accept it (B)
The truth I face (A) came all too unexpected (B)
I was betrayed (A) by every single little second (B)
Instead of great (A) now I’ve just become complacent (B)
I lie awake, afraid (A) my life had no purpose (C)
Lifetime of days (A) and not a single one was even worth it (C)
What's the point if his delivery is awkward and MOST fans don't want to hear it...?
 
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