KushSkywalker vs AkaDemiK vs Charlie (Round 3) - Vote!

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  • KushSkywalker

    Votes: 31 53.4%
  • AkaDemiK

    Votes: 21 36.2%
  • Charlie

    Votes: 6 10.3%

  • Total voters
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KushSkywalker

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Bout to be another one of these nailbiters huh :lupe:

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In the past few hours Ak got 7 votes I only got 4 :merchant:

Was 14-7 now its 18-14 :whoa:
 

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Nice intro on the first track.

Pac would do that shyt all the time.

intro's are always cool to do eventhough most rappers stopped doing it.

Since this being the first track I heard on here, I'll give you a 7.5 out of 10.

Great rhyming.

Oustanding delivery.

Plus you know how to ride the beat.

The flow/energy was just to slow for a dis track.

My suggestion is for you to listen to some 2pac aka don makaveli aka Black Jesus on a routine basis while in your car.Do this for 6 mouths to a year bro. If you study 2pac's style on his last two albums your lyrics will grab people's attention.

1.Study how 2Pac mixed anger with passion.

2.Examine 2pac's confidence on the mic.

3.Analyze how 2pac used anger in his voice on some tracks.

4. Listen to how 2pac created controversy also to grab people's attention.

Now I will go listen to the other rappers on this site to make a judgment.
 
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akademik runnin this rap shyt
bars and beats is runnin this rap shyt
punchline nikka runnin this rap shyt
wordplay nikka runnin this rap shyt
kush skywalker spittin that wack shyt
get zipped up in plastic when it happens, that’s it

ayo this muthafukka kush think he the god in the stars
skywalkin till I force him now he trottin to mars
plottin too hard, sloppy when you jotting ya bars
they uneven, I swing on em like I'm Dominic Dawes
I picture you, crocs in a shorts with snot in ya schnoz
you prolly still rockin girbaud, i’m the rock of gibralt’
popular naw, nikka ain’t hot as you thought
and all that cocky shyt you poppin, get you rocked in ya jaw
those words could set/cassette you get you boxed in the yard
wind back one shot I make you stop with the paws/pause
can’t beat me, rookie moves got you this far
see ya chess/chest sorta weak, it’s just not/knot in ya heart
only way you gon win is if I hop in a bar
happy hour just a dollar for a shot on the charge
got in a brawl, drunk sex, cock in a broad
pass out, wake up Thursday and forgot to record
but this is real life and those dreams are popular thoughts
From all the nikkas I done chopped into small chocolate s'mores
you a pasty muhfukka like a cotton with jaws
Got smacked twice and came back like you caught in withdrawals
first it was the beats http://bit.ly/1UiQt0l then it was the punches
http://bit.ly/1IredbF
a couple more hits and man you toppin the charts
like 'i’m not sure', ya baby moms a 'shot in the dark'
chris brown singing on tour, i'm poppin a broad
for gettin catty, the eagle at ya birdie tomorrow
then i dump you in the gulf cause we not even par
you and ya girl dead, see I gave you a favor
and don’t worry bout ya kid, he gon pay with the razor
wave the blade at his face give ya baby a taper
few lines in his back like monte on the pacers
I don’t play bruh, no god is able to save ya
for that bull I bomb on you like a jager with chaser
don’t pop shyt and please stay away from the faders
you trash sonically, spinning tales you a faker
don’t egg him, i’ll knuckle him, playing no sega
dr. robotnik ya optic when I aim with the laser
that’s a red dot, head shot, brains into vapor
facing techs like you made the front page in the paper
you came in/kaman, claimin you play with the blazer
but on ya block you put in no work, the laziest neighbor

akademik runnin this rap shyt
bars and beats is runnin this rap shyt
punchline nikka runnin this rap shyt
wordplay nikka runnin this rap shyt
this nikka charlie spittin that wack shyt
get zipped up in plastic when it happens, that’s it
body bag season, stuffed in a casket

a wise man told me don’t argue with fools
so I gave the boy a lesson, takin charlie to school
ain’t no flinchin if you thinkin i’m a target for you
cause I ain’t swimmin with the sharks, this a job at the pool
uh, you lack tempo, potential, but you rap simple
scratch the surface and can’t reach me like a back pimple
the rap kimbo, act civil, jack nimble
before I light you off the roof like a bat symbol
the jabs hit you, these punches no weave duckin
please cuz I rush you with deez, you think police comin
the beat bumpin, body bag you on any block
for thinkin you the one seeing eye like fetty wap
you petty ahk, i’m betty crock with the heavy pot
quick to pin him, I spit the venom like eddie brock
and I don’t care if your dezzy cocked, i’m dancin
bring the hands in (hanson) long as you here(hair), you gettin bopped
why so arrogant? shyt is so embarrassing
bored of my new work/Newark cause you live right next to maryland
my old shyt will challenge him, nikka ain’t as talented
you can ask Kush, I ain’t the one to battle with
you got a lil flow but ya bars ain’t matchin it
defeat sneak up on you cause, you ain't knew the balances
snatching off ya chains and ya rings if you flashing it
the only way to keep me off the ice, nancy kerrigan
for keepin up appearances, gon have to bring ya parents in
apparently you suck and nikka fukk comparisons
don’t worry who I sound like, I’ll kill you with a soundbite
around mics i’m tyson, fightin with the crown tight
i’m down right vicious, treat scales like the richter
melodies ripped up, lookin like the victor
who curse yall (kershaw), now i’m in ya base with the blicker
you’ll be dodging more K’s than klayton, get the picture

akademik runnin this rap shyt
bars and beats is runnin this rap shyt
punchline nikka runnin this rap shyt
kush skywalker spittin that wack shyt
this nikka charlie spittin that wack shyt
get zipped up in plastic when it happens, that’s it
body bag season, stuffed in a casket

they tried to skate, but look, ain’t no denying fate
you vampires, for having heart, ya life at stake
empire state, i’m that tall you rats reachin
all that gang bang and couldnt beat me tag teaming
a black demon, that get loose with the toy
cause if charlie think we kickin it i’ll lucy the boy
see that wood stock on me, when I snoop n destroy
kill Charlie for some peanuts, I shoot him in joy
so what you sayin (usain) kush, we only hear the gatlin flow
see i’m jamaican you can’t beat me on the track you hoe
dogs go to heaven charlie, never the booth
you charlie chaplin all ya shyt is better on mute
for gettin cute, shoot, splatter his memory
half a clip, kush everywhere like we at a dispensary
the other batch for charlie and he won’t hear the weapon sound
Think I'm lying/lion till I get him with the 2nd round (charlie batch/lions/2nd rd draft)

#Bars


I'm impressed.

Very impressed.

You being the second rapper I've heard so far, I'll give you a 9.5.

1.Lyrics are focused.

2.Great direction.

3. Very descriptive.

4.vocals show great anger
at target.

You'll be great at storytelling since you offer description to the rhymes you deliver which will grab people's attention. Like you, biggie smalls as well as Tupac Shakur, have Jamaican ancestry which may explain why their vocal delivery is embraced in American hip hop.

If you study both Tupac and Biggie, you will notice that on their mother's side they have Jamaican ancestry.

Sometimes I do ask myself why is it that most of America's most lyrically talented rappers both had Jamaican ancestry, what a coincidence.

Now I will listen to SkyWalkerKush, but his track won't load.I'll try it again right now.
 

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This family life make this shyt almost impossible :mjcry: Wrote this shyt at work today and one taked it after I ate and put my kid to sleep :mjcry:

Two disses, first part for Charlie second for Ak.



OK, I was finally able to load and listen to your track.

The first track was too fast for me; however, your second track where you slow down was more authentic sounding and explains why you won.

As the final rapper I listened to, I'll give you a 9.5 also, which is a tie.

1. Remarkable content.

2.Great confidence on the mic.

3.Nice flow on the second track.

4. Delivery on point.

Mainly due to the vocals on the first track being too fast and Eminem sounding, I decided not give you a 10.Don't get me wrong,Eminem is a talented lyrical rapper;however,the way his voice sounds can be annoying after while.nonetheless, he is a great storyteller.

Vocals are very important in hip hop.So much so that if the people perceive your voice to be annoying coupled with a confusing or too fast rhyming pattern,they wont take you serious as a rapper.

If your vocals are not between Biggie and Tupac Shakur's the hip hop world won't be interested. why you think rappers in Cali or the south aren't taken seriously?

It's hard to explain, but I'll think of analogy that makes clear the standard/model you can thoroughly understand about hip hop.

You know how Ronald Reagan is the standard/model for the Republican platform 20 years after his Presidency? Well,Tupac is the standard/ model for hip hop platform. Do some rappers deviate from 2pac platform yes, but it's the peoples job to get them back on course.

One of the MAIN reasons you won this contest in the polls is because many of us enjoy seeing whites embrace the art of hip hop.

It's not so much that the voters on here liked your rhyming pattern,or your delivery skills.No, they just enjoy seeing whites embrace it.

The real test will be a tie breaking battle between you and the Jamaican rapper
(@AkaDemiK) battling over a specific topic which should be about a bloddy shoot out on the streets with no cops around.
 
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